CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO: WARMING TO THE TASK

“Alright, kid, let me see one more tight draw with Arnold, and then we’ll move on to the driver.”

Hearing Ray’s order, Mustang pulled another ball out from the pile alongside him and carefully positioned it at the edge of the neatly excavated row of divots he’d exhumed thus far in the course of his warm-up. At the beginning of the week, whenever he’d taken to the range at Seminole to work his way through some balls in order to loosen out, Mustang had made sure to try and be as diligent as possible with the process. As the days had slipped closer and closer to the weekend, however, Mustang had, understandably, become somewhat more casual in his approach and gradually taken his foot increasingly off the pedal in terms of intensity – as, after all, back then, his involvement going into the weekend had looked, realistically, as being little more than just another spectator watching the action unfold.

As soon as he’d discovered that not only would he be playing in the Sunday singles, but the foursomes as well, though, that same concentration he’d had on the likes of Monday and Tuesday had returned in spades. From the moment the team bus had arrived at the course early Sunday morning, Mustang had been locked in with a sense of focus unlike anything he’d ever experienced before. The crowd? The noise? The very same things that had proven so distracting the previous day? They’d all faded into the background of Mustang’s consciousness; amounting to nothing more than a faceless mass of colours and unintelligible sound.

Because Mustang had been thinking about one thing and one thing only as he marched towards the range, and that was the Riggs Brothers.

Following their utter annihilation of Greyson and Axel the previous morning, Charlie’s and Reggie’s record in the foursomes had now stretched to an eye-watering seven wins from seven matches across four Walker Cups, and they’d still yet to need more than 16 holes to add to that tally. They were like the English equivalent of Seve Ballesteros and José María Olazábal in the Ryder Cup; except unlike the Spanish legends, ‘defeat’ was a dish still to be tasted by the formidable English twins. They were, seemingly, unstoppable. Yet, as Mustang had walked to the range, his breath hot against the cold morning air, he knew full well that was the exact task Dallas had set himself and Byron – to stop the unstoppable. 

So, from the second he’d strapped on his glove and pulled his sand-wedge from his bag to begin his warm-up, Mustang had been fully clued-in to what he was doing. Every ball. Every shot. Every club. No matter if it was short pitches, sawn-offs, or full-sail sends, Mustang treated every one of them as seriously as if he were facing down the exact same shot out on the course. And, slowly but surely, with each ball he sent whistling out onto the range, Mustang felt his swing getting more and more dialled-in. The contact. The flights. The windows he was hitting. Everything he was seeing and feeling were exactly how they were supposed to be. And it felt good. Really good.

THWWWIIIPPPPP!!!!

Having shaved yet another razor-thin divot from right off the top of the turf, Mustang turned his gaze skyward to check the flight of the ball – going on how solid the contact had felt, though, he was pretty confident that it was going to be looking just fine. Sure enough, as soon as he found it silhouetted against the ever-brightening sky – itself a mixture of pastel pinks and oranges – Mustang saw his ball was just beginning to peel back to the left with the tight draw Ray had requested as it eked out the final few feet remaining between it and its apex.

“I see Arnold’s in tip-top shape this morning, then,” said Rodney, his voice sounding particularly chirpy as it rang out behind Mustang.

After watching his ball land some 175-yards away (the cold morning air taxing it a good 5-yards of carry) Mustang turned around and looked at Rodney. “Yeah, he’s feeling pretty good, alright,” he smiled, moving towards the rear of the hitting bay where Ray was already waiting to hand over his driver. “As you obviously are! Are you not cold, man?!” 

Like Mustang, Rodney was wearing the first of two smart-looking uniforms that had been scripted for the final day’s play. Unlike Mustang, though, who had been wearing the accompanying red sweater and beanie hat that had come with the American foursomes uniform since leaving the Breakers to ward off the early morning chill, Rodney had already foregone any outer layer and was now just walking around in a blue polo shirt adorned with the famous red lion synonymous with the Great Britain & Ireland team.

“Cold?! Are you kidding me?!” scoffed Rodney, his eyes lighting up impishly in the manner Mustang had come to recognize well from their time together over the week. “Back home if we had temperatures like this in the middle of July we’d be counting our lucky stars!”

“Remind me not to go on vacation in England then!” quipped Ray, quick as a flash, as Mustang took the driver from his hand and replaced it with Arnold.

Now armed with the big stick, Mustang walked back over to where his few remaining range balls were scattered on the grass as Ray and Rodney shared a laugh.

“So, come on …” said Rodney, excitedly turning his attention back onto Mustang as he watched him fish a tee out of the pocket on his trousers. “How does it feel to know that in …” He looked at the watch strapped to his wrist. “Less than half an hour you’ll actually be playing in the Walker Cup?!”

After taking a moment to tee up one of the balls he’d popped neatly out of the pile with his driver, Mustang stood back up and looked over at Rodney. “Honestly? Really cool!” he answered, as he busied his right hand by loosely skimming the sole of his driver against the still dewy turf. “I mean, I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t a little nervous. But, really, I’m more excited than anything else – like, at this stage, I can’t wait to just get out there and see how good these Riggs Brothers really are, you know?”

Mustang, of course, already had a pretty good idea about how difficult a challenge Charlie and Reggie were going to be – and not just because of their past accomplishments either. Because as focused as he’d been on his own warm-up and honing his swing, in-between shots, Mustang had been unable to resist stealing the odd glance down the length of the range to where Charlie and Reggie had been warming up themselves. And in those glances, Mustang had seen all the building blocks with which the Riggs Brothers had built their intimidating legacy. The power and speed they generated with their 6-foot-plus, husky frames. Their ability to flight the ball up and down at will. Their shot-shaping skills left and right. Their machine-like distance control with their wedges. 

What had really struck Mustang, however, was seeing how well Charlie’s and Reggie’s individual games complemented one another. Where one brother may have been slightly lacking in one area of their game? That was where the other was particularly strong and vice versa. Basically, when he put together everything he’d seen on the range, it had become pretty clear to Mustang that the reason the Riggs Brothers had never been defeated as a pair was because when they pooled their talents together? They pretty much made the perfect golfer – which, all told, hadn’t exactly made for the most reassuring of thoughts to be rattling around Mustang’s head as he was warming up, but he’d done a good job of ignoring it as well as he had.

“Well, I think that feeling’s a mutual one,” hinted Rodney, lowering his voice as if wanting to make sure he wasn’t overheard by anyone.

“Really?” asked Ray, his interest immediately piqued. “They spoke about Mustang?”

Rodney took a quick look around to make doubly sure that no one from the Great Britain & Ireland team was within earshot. “Well, I won’t say too much …” he whispered, sounding a touch conflicted as he did so. “Cause while the majority of them are twats, they are still my teammates, so …”

“Yeah, no, of course,” reassured Mustang, he, too, mimicking Rodney’s hushed tone.

“But what I will say?” continued Rodney, moving a step closer to Ray and Mustang to further reduce the risk of anyone hearing him reveal secrets from the Great Britain & Ireland team room. “Is that when everyone saw the names Dallas had chosen for the foursomes? Including yours? Well, I’ll put it this way: there were a lot of surprised faces. Even Desmond looked taken aback – and he never gives anything away.”

Mustang and Ray exchanged a loaded glance. When he’d gotten back to his room the previous night after talking with Dallas out on the balcony of the team room, Mustang had told Ray everything they’d spoken about – including the plan he’d proposed of sending out mainly the younger members of the American team to try and throw their Great Britain & Ireland counterparts off their game. So, to now hear that said plan had possibly worked? Was incredibly exciting.

“And do you think they were surprised because … I dunno … they were expecting more of a challenge, maybe?” Mustang asked, trying to subtly squeeze some more information out of Rodney. 

“Well, ‘The Six’ did seem especially confident of their chances after seeing the pairings …” said Rodney, now sounding a touch hesitant as though he felt he’d already said too much. 

“How so?” asked Ray, who, like Mustang, was attempting to pick up as much intel as possible before their source in Rodney dried up.

Again, Rodney took a quick look around. He was in dangerous territory. And he knew it. “Promise that this stays between us three?” he asked, negotiating his terms for revealing what he knew.

“Of course,” swore Mustang, coupling it with a stern expression to show just how serious he was treating Rodney’s request. “We promise.”

“Well, in that case, let’s just say …” said Rodney, looking a tad more relaxed now that he knew his words would be going no further than the hitting bay they were standing in. “After seeing the list of names Dallas had put forward, it was made pretty clear that the expectation for the foursomes should be a clean-sweep and nothing else – and that wasn’t just coming from ‘The Six’ either.”

Mustang and Ray didn’t need Rodney to say another word. They’d heard everything they’d needed to. Because not only had they the confirmation they were looking for that Mustang’s plan to get the Great Britain & Ireland team underestimating the Americans had worked, but were they to believe what they’d inferred from what Rodney had said that this same underestimation had been, for all intents and purposes, fuelled by none other than Desmond Finch himself? Then as far as Mustang was concerned, everybody else sporting the same red lion on their chests as Rodney was correct, the foursomes was going to be a clean-sweep.

They just didn’t know yet that they were going to be on the wrong side of it.

He was going to make damn sure of that.

*

“Do you always leave it this late to come to the tee?!” asked Byron, his tone riding the line between ‘mildly snippy’ and ‘downright irritated’.

“Sorry …” replied Mustang, hurrying his step to reach Byron as quickly as possible. “Just wanted to get a few more putts in.”

After finishing his chat with Rodney – wherein he’d excitedly wished him good luck for his match – Mustang had proceeded to hammer five or six ‘picture perfect’ drives out onto the range before heading to the expansive practice green to get his putter as suitably warmed-up as the rest of his bag was. Before he knew it, fifteen minutes of rolling every length putt imaginable had elapsed and Mustang was getting the nod from Ray that it was time to head to the tee.

What they didn’t realize, though, was that their definition of “on-time” and that of Byron’s, obviously, differed quite dramatically.

“Yeah, well, I just hope they were worth it …” huffed Byron, already taking to marching off purposefully in the direction of the 1st. “Cause we were supposed to be on the tee two minutes ago – so, giddy-up and you might get a sugar cube if you’re lucky.”

Given the scoreline heading into the second day and the seemingly insurmountable deficit they faced, as a smiling Mustang set off in stride after Byron, part of him was thinking that the raucous atmosphere which had greeted every American golfer who had stepped on the 1st-tee the previous morning would be replaced with a somewhat more subdued and muted reception.

As soon as he and Byron made their way through the roped-off pathway that cut through the crowd, however, and emerged out into the crucible that was the 1st-tee, Mustang realized just how wrong he’d been.

As in really wrong.

Greeted by a wall of sound unlike anything he’d heard before in his life, Mustang could only look around in disbelief as a neverending tidal wave of “U-S-A!” chants reverberated around the tee from the three packed galleries surrounding it. Everywhere he looked it was just a sea of red, white, and blue. American flags, both big and small, flying proudly. People with their faces painted in the same colours as that of Old Glory. There was even a small gathering of about six or seven guys directly behind the tee-box dressed in matching American flag suits and sunglasses. All of them shouting. All of them cheering. And all of them clapping. Truthfully, it was a somewhat overwhelming sight to behold.

On the final day of the Memorial Matchplay a few months previously, given the rather hectic, last-minute nature of how he’d come to find himself actually playing in the final, Mustang hadn’t had the opportunity to be affected by the volume of people who’d crammed into the Creek that day to see him and Byron duke it out. It had just been a case of him grabbing his bag, teeing up a ball, and going to work.

Standing on that 1st-tee, however, there was no escaping the reality of the situation Mustang found himself in. He was about to play in the top match out in the Sunday foursomes at the Walker Cup. That was happening. No getting around it. No ignoring it. And it was beginning to have an effect. His heart was thumping in his chest. His mouth was bone-dry. And having spent the morning doing everything he could to fight off the salt-licked chill that had been hanging in the air, he was now feeling uncomfortably warm beneath his sweater.

In short, Mustang was nervous. But this wasn’t a run-of-the-mill bout of nerves. No, this was a nervousness unlike anything he’d ever experienced before. This was all-consuming. Disorientating.

And, yet, as Mustang looked across the tee and saw the Riggs Brothers standing together and talking with one of Desmond’s vice-captains, they seemed … fine. They didn’t look nervous or pensive – quite the opposite, in fact. They were laughing. They were joking. All told, if one didn’t know any better, you wouldn’t have been blamed for thinking Charlie and Reggie were just waiting to head out for a regular weekend 18 at their local club as opposed to being on the cusp of heading out in a match of huge importance on the deciding day of the Walker Cup.

“How we doing, gentlemen?!”

With the sound of his voice yanking him, gratefully, from his thoughts before he could become too preoccupied with the Riggs Brothers’ apparent nonchalance in the face of their match, Mustang turned his attention towards Dallas, who’d emerged from the mass of people gathered on the tee to come speak to him and Byron.

“Yeah, fine,” replied Byron, he, too, sounding bizarrely unphased by the occasion. “Just wanna get goin’.”

“That’s always the way with matches like these,” sighed Dallas, knowingly, as he raised his voice to be heard over the energetic chants of ‘U-S-A!’ that didn’t appear to be showing any signs of waning. “Be it the Walker Cup or Ryder Cup, it feels like an eternity for them to start, and then when they actually do? It feels like they’re over in the blink of an eye – it’s just the nature of the beast!” Dallas turned his attention down onto Mustang, who, in the meantime, had become distracted, yet again, by the noise and colour of the crowd. “And how ‘bout you, kid?” he asked, smiling excitedly. “How ya feeling?”

Mustang didn’t know how to respond. Were he to answer Dallas’ question truthfully, he’d have to say he was feeling as nervous as a pig in an abattoir. But after doing what he could to sell him on the idea of putting out the other younger players for the foursomes and, therefore, himself in this very position? Mustang felt he owed it to Dallas to try and come across as confident as possible.

“Yeah … I’m good …” replied Mustang, somehow scrounging together enough saliva to unstick his tongue from the roof of his mouth and form the words. “Looking, uh … looking forward to it.”

Dallas grinned. “Wow, that nervous, huh?!” he laughed.

“What?!” said Mustang, taken aback at seeing how easily his hastily erected facade had been seen through. “No! I’m not nervous! I’m fine! Really!”

Dallas reached out and placed a reassuring hand on Mustang’s shoulder. “Don’t worry, kid …” he smiled, dipping down as best he could to avoid people in the crowd seeing what he was saying. “It’d be weird if you weren’t.”

Feeling a lot better at knowing he didn’t have to hide his nerves anymore, Mustang smiled weakly, though nonetheless appreciatively.

Although …” replied Dallas, continuing to smile warmly as he kept his hand on Mustang’s shoulder. “If you want, I’ve got a surefire way to get rid of those nerves, if you’re interested?”

“Yes! Absolutely!” said Mustang, eager to hear any pearls of wisdom Dallas might have to offer that could quell the nerves churning in his stomach. “What is it?!”

“Well, it’s quite simple, really …” said Dallas, finally lifting his enormous hand from off of Mustang’s shoulder. “You just have to hit the opening tee-shot.”

Having been happily ignoring their conversation up until now, after hearing what Dallas had just suggested, Byron’s ears immediately pricked up. “What?!” he said, hoping against hope that Dallas had somehow misspoken.

“Yeah, what?!” added Mustang, his mouth beginning to experience drought-like conditions once again.

“I thought I was leading us off?!” hissed Byron, lowering his voice to avoid drawing any attention to their conversation. “You know, to make the most of the par 5’s on the front side?! Not to mention the fact I did it yesterday and crushed it right down the middle!”

“And I’m well aware of that,” replied Dallas, looking to lower down the temperature of their exchange before it boiled over for everyone to see. “But need I remind you, Byron, how nervous you were yesterday morning before hitting that very same tee-shot? And how handling it as well as you did set you up to play some of the best golf I’ve ever seen you produce?”

Much to his annoyance, Byron had no answer for Dallas. He wished he did. But he was coming up completely blank. Because, ultimately, he knew Dallas was right.

Fine …” Byron mumbled, averting his gaze disgruntledly after having his very own argument used against him. “He can have the tee-shot.”

Recognizing that he’d gotten Byron on board with his plan – albeit reluctantly – Dallas turned and looked back at Mustang, whose mind had promptly raced into overdrive since the idea of him hitting the opening tee-shot had been proposed.

“So, what do ya think, kid?” Dallas asked, just as the starter for the match began to carefully scrutinize the face of his watch, diligently counting down every tick ahead of getting proceedings officially underway. “The shot clock’s winding down and the ball is yours … but only if you want it.”

Mustang didn’t know what to do. Part of him could, of course, see the logic in Dallas’ offer. If he were able to step up and stripe a drive right down the centre of the fairway in spite of the nerves he was feeling; the expectations of the crowd; and the sense of responsibility weighing so heavy on his shoulders it felt as though Mr Denby had taken to sitting on top of them; then there’d be nothing he wouldn’t be able to do. Given his legs, currently, felt as though they’d been replaced with iron bars, however, the prospect of merely walking over to the tee seemed challenging enough for Mustang, never mind then actually hitting a drive once he got there.

“I hate to push ya, Mustang …” said Dallas, stealing a glance at the large Rolex clock at the rear of the tee-box and seeing it was, at most, thirty or so seconds away from hitting 9 o’clock. “But I have to let the starter know who’s teeing-off before the match starts, so I need an answer – you want it or not?”

Knowing there was now a literal ticking clock hanging over his head, Mustang’s mind became even more clouded. All he wanted to do was go talk to Ray about this; see if he’d be able to use his uncanny ability to help him think about things more clearly and therefore make a decision one way or the other. Unfortunately, though, given he, too, could see the same clock as Dallas, Mustang knew that just wasn’t an option anymore. This was his decision to make, and his alone. 

Luckily for Mustang, however, regardless of whether or not he could speak to him, deep down in the pit of his stomach, he knew full well that there was only one answer Ray would, realistically, be pushing him towards in this scenario.

So, Mustang decided to listen.

“Alright …” he said, narrowing his eyes and clenching his jaw determinedly as he looked up at Dallas. “I’ll do it. I want the tee-shot.”

Dallas and Byron exchanged a look. As far as they were concerned, it sure sounded like Mustang meant what he was saying – Dallas, though, just needed to dot the i’s and cross the t’s.

“You sure?” he asked, doing his best to ignore the fact the starter was just beginning to check that his microphone was ready to go. “Cause you can say no.”

Mustang cast his gaze back off across the tee-box. He saw Charlie and Reggie were just starting to ready themselves for the formalities which would precede the beginning of the match. Going on the fact Charlie had pulled his driver and was making some long, languid practice swings off to the side of the tee-box, it was clear that, just like the previous day’s session, he’d gotten the nod to lead himself and Reggie off once again.

Just as he brought his driver back down to the bottom of his swing, however – as if somehow feeling that he was looking at him – Charlie lifted his head and, in a very deliberate move, locked eyes with Mustang.

“Five points,” he mouthed silently, referencing the lead Great Britain & Ireland had over America.

Leaving Mustang with a smug grin and goading wink of his eye, Charlie then went back to making casual practice swings with his driver – no one none the wiser as to what he’d just done.

Mustang turned and looked at Dallas once more. “Naw, trust me …” he said, looking dangerously focused. “I got this.”

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    1. Hey Lee,

      I’ve had a look at the official stopwatch … and I can confirm that you were, indeed, first! Only by two minutes, though, so it was something of a photo finish! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a comment, though, Lee, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Nudger,

      I’m really delighted to hear that! Working on the proper onomatopoeia for iron shots (THWWWIIIPPPPP) and drives (FWWWWEEESSSHHH) was something I spent a good lot of time trying to figure out in the first book because, if you play golf, those sounds are so synonymous with the game that I really wanted to try and capture them as best I could so that it would immerse people in the story and, as you said, help people see those shots when I’d be describing them 😁

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  1. I ordered a sweater the other day and I was notified that it shipped yesterday! Great service and great chapter.

    1. Hey Irene,

      Well, first of all, I’m delighted that you enjoyed the chapter. Secondly, though, that’s absolutely fantastic to hear that your sweater has already shipped! Whenever people are parting with their own money, I really want the service to be as good as possible, so that’s a relief to hear! 😁

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      1. Hey Bill,

        That is absolutely fantastic to hear! I’m delighted it came so quickly! 👍

        Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive review, Bill, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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  2. Just as he brought his driver back down to the bottom of his swing, however – as if somehow feeling that he was looking at him – Charlie lifted his head and, in a very deliberate move, locked eyes with Mustang.

    “Five points,” he mouthed silently, referencing the lead Great Britain & Ireland had over America.

    Leaving Mustang with a smug grin and goading wink of his eye, Charlie then went back to making casual practice swings with his driver – no one none the wiser as to what he’d just done.

    Mustang turned and looked at Dallas once more. “Naw, trust me …” he said, looking dangerously focused. “I got this.”

    000

    I love this segment so much

    1. Hey Jessie,

      That’s really brilliant to hear! I do love a good punchy ending, so I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

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  3. There is almost so much reading in this like it is the inverse of quality over quantity. My point is that there is a lot of quality but also lots of quantity too!

    1. Hey Resst,

      I understand what you’re saying! Whenever I sit down to write a chapter, given the format and how I only publish once a week, I always endeavour to have the chapters contain, at least, 15-minutes worth of reading (or what my computer tells me is 15-minutes at any rate), so people feel as though they’re getting something substantial! I’m delighted you appreciate it! 😁

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    1. Hey Evan,

      That is such a great thing to hear! Whenever I’m sitting down and writing these chapters, I always hope that what I’m doing is good enough to get people immersed in the story and feel as though they’re getting a good sense of the atmosphere, so that’s really cool that you got that feeling from this chapter! 😁

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    1. Hey Trace,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Trace, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – you know well that I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Jen,

      That is so cool to hear that all of your friends have started reading the book from the beginning! You’ve done a great job growing the ranks of the Mustang Gang! 😁

      Vielen dank for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Jen, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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      Stephen F. Moloney

  4. Knowing there was now a literal ticking clock hanging over his head, Mustang’s mind became even more clouded. All he wanted to do was go talk to Ray about this; see if he’d be able to use his uncanny ability to help him think about things more clearly and therefore make a decision one way or the other. Unfortunately, though, given he, too, could see the same clock as Dallas, Mustang knew that just wasn’t an option anymore. This was his decision to make, and his alone.

    I feel this. Like you just want to get a time out but there is none. I liked the way it played out

    1. Hey WBN,

      I’m really glad that you enjoyed this bit and felt that sense of pressure I was trying to get across. I think we’ve all been in a situation like that at one time or another, and they don’t feel great! 😁

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    1. Hey Red,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Red, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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  5. 先月、同僚から「楽しくて簡単に読める」と勧められて読み始めました。楽しんでいますよ。週刊誌式が私には合っています。これからも頑張ってください!そしてムスタングを日本に連れて行ってください

    1. Hey Shin,

      That is really cool to hear! I’m delighted that you are enjoying it (and also that your colleague recommended it!). I think you are right, though; there is something unique about only getting one chapter a week of a story, and I think it really does suit the busy lives that people have now. And would you believe, when I was trying to decide on an idea for the second book, it actually came down to the idea I’m currently doing and taking Mustang to Japan –so, your wish almost happened! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Shin, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ありがとうございました。

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      Stephen F. Moloney

  6. – Mustang turned and looked at Dallas once more. “Naw, trust me …” he said, looking dangerously focused. “I got this.” –

    This is building to more cool things where i literally saw ‘this is cool’ aloud here in bed while reading

    1. Hey Pete,

      I love hearing when people have audible reactions to reading my stuff because I do the exact same thing when I’m reading a book! And, from my perspective, I certainly hope people will think where the story is going will be cool anyway! 😁🤞

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    1. Hey Henry,

      ✊🐎

      Delighted you enjoyed it!

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Henry, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Ollie,

      That was the exact kind of feeling I was hoping to get with ‘The Six! Where they’re like this notorious band of bad guys or a heel faction in wrestling – hence, why I enjoy writing their parts so much! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Ollie, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Yoo,

      That is absolutely fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you’re so happy with the service! 😁👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Yoo; for continuing to read the chapters every week; and, of course, for purchasing one of the sweaters – as I always say on here, that kind of support helps me out tremendously, so I really do appreciate it 🙏

      I hope you enjoy your sweater when it arrives!

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Lub,

      That is so nice to hear that you read the story for your son! I’m delighted that he’s enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Lub, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Dziękuję Ci.

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Grant,

      Yeah, I definitely get what you’re saying – this story is far more in the traditional style of a book, so it does make it easier to get that sense of flow going with it. What I was looking to do with the first book and the idea of switching back and forth between the future and looking back at the past (the present in which this book is set) through Ray’s eyes, was to just build up that sense of lore around Mustang straight off the bat 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Grant, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Pro Shop Bass Man,

      😂😂😂

      Whilst I can’t condone violence, the idea of Mustang and Ray having a full-blown caddie/player-style conversation over which club would be best to hit Fletcher with is tempting. Ray would, of course, be pushing for the putter – the more conservative option, but, ultimately, affording more control. Mustang, on the other hand, would be drawn to the lob wedge – the riskier of the two choices, but it would undoubtedly leave greater scope to pull off something spectacular 😂

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a funny comment, Pro Shop Bass Man, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Wayne,

      That is absolutely fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you’re enjoying it!

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Wayne; for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week; and, of course, for purchasing one of the ebooks – as I always say on here, that kind of support really does help me out a tremendous amount, so it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey James,

      And given they were both quite hefty chapters, you had yourself a fine bit of reading to catch up on! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, James, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week (or every two, in this instance 😁) – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Kieran,

      That’s always great to hear! Glad you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Kieran, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Gunther,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m thrilled you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Gunther, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Benny,

      Ah brilliant! It’s always cool to hear from a new reader! I’m delighted you’ve been enjoying the story, though! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Benny, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Joss,

      I’m really glad you’ve been enjoying it! I think it has definitely kicked up a notch with the second book. The more straightforward narrative style has helped with that, I think 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Joss, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know well, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  7. My auntie gave me this book for my birthday and I’ve been reading ever since. it’s my first time to leave a comment. I like the books a lot you are my favorite author

      1. Hey Vanessa,

        Like it was with Rob, that is so cool to hear that I’m your favourite author! I’m honoured! 🙏

        I used to love Roald Dahl’s books when I was growing up as well – my favourite one was always, ‘Danny, the Champion of the World’ 😁

        Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Vanessa, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        ✊🐎

        Stephen F. Moloney

      2. You have been my best writer since i got this on my holidays because i love golf and want to be Mustang when I am older.

        1. Hey xxtonecatX,

          That is such a lovely thing to hear! Like it is with the others, it’s an honour to think that I’m your favourite writer 😁 And that’s really cool that you want to be like Mustang when you get older! With a lot of hard work, perseverance, and the courage to try, who knows what could happen! 👍

          Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, xxtonecatX, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

          ✊🐎

          Stephen F. Moloney

          1. Hey Janie,

            That is so cool to hear! I’m honoured! When I started writing the first story last year I never thought I’d wind up in a position where people would be telling me that I’m their favourite author, so to see that now is really amazing! 😁

            Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Janie, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

            ✊🐎

            Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Rob 09,

      First of all, welcome to the comments section! And, secondly, that is so cool to hear that I’m your favourite author! I’m thrilled you’ve been enjoying the stories so much! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Rob 09, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hope you keep enjoying the story! 👍

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    2. My kid said this last weekend so I got a tonne of Mustang merchandise plus e-books (she loves ebooks) for xmas

      1. Hey Orla,

        That really is mind-blowing to hear. I mean, when I started this last year, you hope that it’s going to go well and that people will like it, but to think now that some kids actually think of me as their favourite author?! It’s just incredibly humbling 😁

        Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Orla; for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week; and, of course, for making all of those purchases for Christmas – like, as you know well, that kind of support really does help me out tremendously, so to hear that you went a bought a shot of stuff like you have is incredible and, obviously, massively appreciated 🙏

        ✊🐎

        Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Samuel 11,

        That is such a fantastic to hear! I never thought I’d see anyone saying that I was their favourite writer when I started Mustang last year, so to see so many people, including yourself, saying it now is absolutely mind-blowing! I’m honoured! 😁

        Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Samuel 11, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        P.S. Thanks to your mom as well for getting you the book for your birthday, and I hope as well that you had a really lovely day whenever it was 👍

        ✊🐎

        Stephen F. Moloney

  8. Question: Did you decide on this chapter this week? What made you make the decision to go this way? Or is it part of a plan? No need to answer if it’s too rude but I am very interested

    1. Hey Karl,

      You’re fine! I like questions! 😁

      Well, during my week off, I still wrote a chapter so that I could get ahead of myself by a week to ease some of the pressure – so, this chapter was actually written last week. Even then, though, when I started writing it? I just pieced the chapter together as the week progressed and this was what I ended up producing.

      There are certain main stage posts for the overall arc of the story that I’m building towards – like, Fletcher’s reveal as a bad guy at the Walker Cup was a stage post; the outcome of the Walker Cup is the next one – but sometimes chapters just kinda manifest over the course of a week without any prior thinking. I just start writing and make it up as it comes to me.

      The main way I think about writing the story is really just by going, “If this was a film you were watching, what would the next scene be?”. And sometimes, without any planning, those ‘scenes’ can wind up becoming entire chapters if I think they contribute to the story.

      Hope that helps! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a cool comment, Karl, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. That’s really interesting. I was going to ask something like this. You should do a stream about the process some time I think people would be interested

        1. Hey Richard,

          Ah brilliant, well, I’m really glad my answer covered your question as well! 👍 And that certainly would be a cool idea; I mean, it does seem to be a process that has caught the attention of a lot of readers – though, as to how much actual useful information I could give people would be the big question! 😁

          Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Richard, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

          ✊🐎

          Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Loop,

      Yeah, this book has really kicked up a notch from where the first left off. MUSTANG I needed to be written the way that it was to build up that sense of lore around Mustang, but this more straightforward narrative style does lend itself to creating a more engaging story, definitely 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Loop; for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week; and, of course, for buying one of the ebooks – as I always say on here, that kind of support really does help me out tremendously, so it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  9. “Five points,” he mouthed silently, referencing the lead Great Britain & Ireland had over America.

    This gave me some chills for whatever reason

    1. Hey Bree,

      That’s really cool to hear because I was trying to think what would be a good thing for Charlie to do that would be subtle, yet infuriating, and that’s what came to mind – so, I’m delighted it had an effect on you! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Bree, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Nei,

      That is brilliant to hear! I’m delighted that you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Nei, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  10. New to this since chap 18. Went back to start of new story. Likeing it. Do you recommend going to read book one?

    1. Hey Roland,

      Well, first of all, I’m really glad to hear that you’re enjoying the story! 😁 To answer your question, though, is a little tricky. I mean, as a writer, in an ideal world people would read the books in order. But as for whether or not it’s necessary to enjoy the rest of this book? Perhaps not. But, I do make references (and will continue to do that) to things that happened and things that people said in the first book, so that might be something to bear in mind.

      So, in short, I would recommend reading the first book if you want to give yourself a fuller, rounder picture of the backstory and everything that Mustang and Ray have been through before the events of this book – but it’s purely a matter of choice for yourself. It isn’t necessary, but it might increase your enjoyment of this story 👍

      Thank you very much for your question, Roland, and, of course, for giving the story a chance – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Hein,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m thrilled that you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Hein, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Easy,

      I’m delighted that you’re so into it! As a writer that’s exactly what I hope to achieve with each chapter, so I’m thrilled you’re enjoying the story! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Easy, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Pedro,

      That really is fantastic to hear! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying it so much! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Pedro, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Asif,

      I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Asif, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Chris,

      I’m glad you enjoyed it! To answer your question, though, this chapter actually came out on Saturday morning – so, it’s still the same day for publishing and in around the same time as well (i.e. in the morning Irish time) 😁👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Chris, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know well, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Horace,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m really glad you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Horace, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know well, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  11. I still cannot fathom how much I hate Fletcher. It’s the most i’ve hated a book character since I was a kid

    1. Hey Paulie,

      Then I have successfully done my job! I think it’s always a good sign of a villain, that even when they’re not physically in a chapter, you’re still annoyed by them – which seems to be the case, luckily, with a lot of people reading the story! 😁

      Thank you very much for, as always, taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Paulie, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know well, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  12. I really have enjoyed reading this week to week since I have been off work with covid. Thank you.

    1. Hey Freddie,

      You’re very welcome, but I’m just glad I’ve been able to be of some help! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Freddie, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hope you get better soon! 👍

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  13. “Alright …” he said, narrowing his eyes and clenching his jaw determinedly as he looked up at Dallas. “I’ll do it. I want the tee-shot.”

    I can see him doing this!

    1. Hey Moon Bear,

      That’s really cool that you can get that mental image of Mustang! Those narrowed eyes and steely look of determination have almost become his signature expression at this stage! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Moon Bear, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Reed,

      That’s really cool to hear! I’m delighted you’ve been enjoying them! They do seem to have been well received by people, so that’s always great to see! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Reed, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Sean,

      That really is fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Sean, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  14. I ordered the new sweatshirt last week and it came in the post today. I live in Florida. It’s really good service.

    1. Hey Ike,

      That really is brilliant to hear! I’m thrilled that it came so quickly and that you’re happy with the service – all the boxes ticked! ✅ 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive review, Ike, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hopefully, the sweater will be more than enough protection against whatever chilly temperatures you’ll be seeing in Florida this year! 👍

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Carla,

      That is such a great thing to hear because whenever I’m sitting down to write out these chapters, one of the main things I always hope to achieve is making it as evocative as possible so that when you’re reading it you really see what I’m seeing in my own head when I’m writing it out 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Carla, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  15. This was in my local paper according to my mom in Indiana lol i’m going to try and get her to take a photo of the article

    1. Hey D. Wayne,

      Wow! Really?! Yeah, if you could get a photo of it that would be absolutely fantastic or even the name of the paper would be good! That’s crazy! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to tell me that, D. Wayne, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  16. My boy loves this book. I bought the EBook so he could read on his tablet – he can’t be prised away from it – and he’s read it twice. Just waiting on the next Ebook for Christmas haha if it’s finished ha

    1. Hey Herring,

      Wow! He’s already read it twice?! That’s so cool! I’m delighted he likes it so much! Well, as much as I’d love to be able to say that this particular book will be ready for Christmas in ebook form, I’m afraid that won’t be happening – unless, of course, I manage to snag some of Santa’s elves and put them to work writing chapters for me! 😅 Definitely for Christmas 2022, though! 😂

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Herring; for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week; and, of course, for buying one of the ebooks – as you know, that kind of support really does help me out tremendously, so it’s very much appreciated 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Putterman,

      Oh, I totally agree! Like, that really would be so cool to see! Like, be it animated or live-action, I wouldn’t care! Here’s hoping it gets big enough to make that happen! 😁🤞

      Thank you very much for, as always, taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Putterman, and, of course, for continuing to come back to check out the new chapters every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

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