CHAPTER SIXTEEN: KNOCK ON WOOD

Having heard the required beep, Mustang yanked his keycard out of the lock, pulled down the handle, and opened back the door to his room.

“Holy cow!” he exclaimed, nearly tripping over his jaw as he walked hesitantly inside. “No way this is where I’m staying!”

But there was no mistake. A huge bed covered with pillows and crisp, white linens. A massive TV hung up on the wall. A private balcony with a view looking right out over the ocean, itself sparkling blue in the sunlight with white caps breaking intermittently across its surface. It was all for Mustang – except, in this instance, those things weren’t what he was focusing on.

Dotted all around the room, wherever his eyes seemed to fall, there was free stuff. In front of the door that connected Mustang’s room to Ray’s on the other side of the wall, there was a full-size staff bag emblazoned with a combination of the American Walker Cup crest and the stars and stripes, plus his name, ‘MUSTANG PEYTON’, embroidered on the very front of it in white thread. Covering nearly the entirety of the bedspread there were enough piles of neatly wrapped clothes to open a small store, not to mention the numerous new golf gloves, golf hats, and special Walker Cup headcovers littered in around them. And if all that wasn’t enough, placed on the comfortable-looking chaise longue just in front of the sliding doors that led out onto the balcony, there were four shoeboxes filled with, what could only be, four brand new pairs of golf shoes.

“No, this is definitely the right room, alright …” Ray confirmed, following Mustang in through the door and taking a quick mental inventory of the raft of extra stuff they were going to have to somehow fit into their luggage for the trip back home.

Having reached the bed, Mustang began taking a closer look at the piles of clothes, noting the various shades and combinations of red, white, and navy blue fabric the sweaters and golf shirts were made of. “I mean, look at all this,” he said, still struggling to believe that everything he was seeing could really be for him. “There must be five or six pairs of pants here!”

“Five or six?!” Ray replied, aghast, as he momentarily halted his examination of the brand new golf bag and looked over at Mustang. “Hell, I ain’t even got that many back home!” 

Just as a smiling Mustang picked up one of the golf hats lying on the bed – a nice, deep navy blue one with the Walker Cup crest embroidered on the front – three sharp raps of knuckles on wood drew his attention towards the door.

“That better not be room service,” Ray warned, his eyes narrowing suspiciously as he watched Mustang toss the hat back down onto the bed and make for the door.

“How could it possibly be room service?” replied Mustang, taking to walking backwards en route to the door in order to question Ray. “We’ve literally been together since we got off the plane.”

“Yeah, well … ok, that’s a fair point, I guess,” Ray answered begrudgingly, as he realized there was no arguing with Mustang’s response. “But, still, remember what I said about room service in the car?”

“No ordering any until we know we don’t have to pay for it,” said Mustang, exasperatedly rattling off the expected response.

“‘At a boy,” said Ray, happy to leave Mustang carry on with the job of answering the door now that he’d heard him parrot back the answer he’d been looking for.

With a rueful shake of his head and amused rolling of his eyes, Mustang took the final few steps needed across the luxuriously thick carpet covering the floor to reach the door and pulled it open. Where, normally, he’d have expected to see the face of whoever had knocked on the door standing outside, however, Mustang, instead, found himself staring straight into the barrel-like chest of Dallas Rugger.

“You can tell Ray to relax,” said Dallas, his deep baritone voice rolling smoothly out through the wry grin on his face as he looked down at Mustang from just below the lintel of the door. “Room service for the week is on me.”

“Mr. Rugg-…” said Mustang, before quickly catching himself. “I mean, uh … Dallas … hi, how are you?”

“Busy, but good,” replied Dallas. “How ‘bout you boys, though? How was the flight?”

“Oh, yeah, the flight was great!” Mustang answered, his tongue finally feeling as though it were catching up to his brain. “I mean, it was my first time on a plane, so, I don’t really have any bad flights to judge against it – but it seemed good to me!”

“And the room is alright?” Dallas asked, dipping his head down slightly and peeking inside. “No problems?”

“Problems?!” said Mustang, shocked that anyone could possibly find fault with a room like that which he was standing in. “God, no! It’s great!”

After continuing to look into the room for a second or two, mumbling approvingly but not actually saying any discernible words, Dallas finally looked down at Mustang. “So … do you mind if I come in?” he asked, sounding as though he’d grown tired of waiting for the invitation he’d been expecting to come.

“Oh! Yeah! I mean … no, of course not!” replied a stuttering Mustang, embarrassed that he hadn’t thought to invite his captain, of all people, inside sooner. “Come on in! Sorry!”

“Ha! Don’t worry ‘bout it, kid,” laughed Dallas, clapping Mustang reassuringly on the arm as he walked in through the door past him, ducking his head as he moved to avoid smacking it off the lintel.

After quickly closing the door behind him, Mustang – who was still quietly annoyed with himself – followed Dallas back into the room. As he and Ray engaged in the usual pleasantries and discussion about the various legs of their journey from Louisiana to Florida, however, Mustang couldn’t help but appreciate, once again, just how big Dallas really was. During their first encounter on the 18th fairway at the Creek, Mustang had, of course, wondered at Dallas’ height and just all-round ‘largeness’. But now that he was actually seeing him inside for the first time, it was as though Mustang was looking at him with fresh eyes all over again – because he looked even bigger than before. When he’d first walked into the room a few minutes previously, Mustang had marvelled at how much space there was, as it easily dwarfed his own bedroom back home in Marais des Voleurs. Yet, to now see Dallas standing inside the exact same room, arms folded and leaning against the polished wood desk facing the bed, he looked as though he’d stumbled into a child’s playhouse where everything was just a smidge too small for him. 

“Ain’t that right, kid?” said Ray, suddenly throwing the conversational ball to Mustang from out of nowhere.

“Uh … sorry, what was that?” Mustang replied, taking said ball and firing it straight back to Ray for him to bail him out.

“I was just tellin’ Dallas how blown away you are with all this stuff?” Ray answered, prompting Mustang with a loose gesture in the direction of the clothes on the bed.

“Oh!” replied Mustang, grateful to be back on the same page as everybody. “Yeah, it’s crazy. Thank you so much.”

“No need to thank me,” said Dallas, nonchalantly waving off the idea. “As far as I’m concerned, halfway to playin’ good is lookin’ good; so, given there’s only so much I can do to try and make the former happen, I said I’d, at least, have the latter on lock for my boys.”

“Speakin’ of the boys,” said Ray, sliding the shoe boxes on the chaise longue out of the way so that he could sit down. “Is the rest of the team after arrivin’? Cause we saw Fletcher downstairs but didn’t spot anyone else.”

Before he answered, Dallas brought one of his shovel-sized hands up to his face and wearily rubbed his eyes. Having looked fine while standing outside in the hallway, now that he was seeing Dallas in the full light of day courtesy of the balcony doors, Mustang could tell that he was, indeed, bearing all the hallmarks of someone who, themselves, had admitted to being busy – because he looked exhausted. The bags under his faintly bloodshot eyes that, undoubtedly, were only going to get bigger as the week wore on. The dark circles under those same bags that betrayed the fact he, clearly, hadn’t gotten a solid night’s sleep in quite a few days. There even appeared to be one or two more wrinkles after carving their way into his once ageless-looking face since that first morning they’d met at the Creek.

As much as these signs showed how tired he was, though, the biggest takeaway Mustang was getting from them was just how much the upcoming week obviously meant to Dallas. He, of course, knew that he would be taking his role as being the U.S. Captain charged with stopping Desmond Finch seriously – how could he not? But for Mustang to see Dallas looking this tired and this stressed a full six days out from the opening tee-shot actually being struck down the 1st at Seminole, it just brought home for him how big a deal the Walker Cup really was; and reaffirmed for him how, if called upon, he would whatever he could to help win it back – both for the U.S. and for Dallas. Because he’d backed him to be his alternate, and, more than anything, Mustang wanted to repay that faith.

“We’re getting there,” Dallas answered, bringing his hand back down from his face and looking over at Ray. “I think of the nine other guys on the team, seven have arrived and are actually in the hotel. We’re just waiting on Conrad and Greyson to arrive in from California this afternoon, and then we’ll have a full deck – unlike our friends from across the pond who all arrived late last night on a plane chartered specially for the occasion by Desmond.”

Thanks to the research he’d done after the U.S. team had been announced, Mustang knew that the ‘Conrad’ and ‘Greyson’ Dallas had just mentioned were ones ‘Conrad Kennedy’ and ‘Greyson Ortega’, both of whom were pillars of the Stanford golf team; ironically, alongside Finn Hennessy and Maddox Breckon from ‘The Six’, their soon-to-be opponents for the week.

“So, that means Byron is here …” said Mustang, too busy thinking about the fact he was currently sharing the same recycled air as that of his oldest rival to find out more about the, admittedly, cool-sounding chartered plane that had ferried the Great Britain & Ireland team across the Atlantic to Florida.

Another wry grin lit up Dallas’ face. “Yeah, he and his old man arrived yesterday evening,” he confirmed. “And hey, look, I probably should have said this before now, but I know you and Byron have something of a … history, so, let me just make it clear that when you and I met at the Creek a few weeks back? The idea of me picking Byron for the team? Well, at that point, it was just that – an idea. Who got the final spot was down to between him and two other guys. So, I just don’t want you to think that I was deliberately keeping you in the dark or anything.”

“No, of course not,” said Mustang, eager to dispel any notion that his nose was somehow out of joint. “And, anyway, as far as I’m concerned, you’re the captain: whoever you choose to be on the team is your call to make and yours alone – you don’t have to explain yourself to me.” Mustang paused for a moment before saying what had just popped into his head, as he couldn’t quite believe that he was contemplating actually saying it out loud. “And for what it’s worth?” he continued, forcing himself to get the words out before the pause had a chance to become awkwardly long. “Whatever about how me and him get along … Byron is a great golfer – annoying, undoubtedly – but a killer nonetheless. So, if anyone has the stones to take on ‘The Six’ and come away with a point? It’s him.”

An impressed smile curled the corners of Dallas’ mouth. “Well, thank you, Mustang,” he said, his smile not losing any of its enthusiasm. “I’ll be sure to bear that in mind.”

Before he could say anything else, a message popped into Dallas’ phone, the sharply loud ringtone demanding his attention like a brattish child throwing a tantrum at a playground. “I was thinking it had been more than five minutes …” he sighed dryly, as he rooted his phone out of his pocket. After taking a second to read the message through heavily squinted eyes and by holding it a good arm’s length away from his face, an exasperated Dallas slid his phone back inside his pocket; clearly, yet another task had been added to his already busy schedule.

“Well, I’ve been summoned – again …” said Dallas, leaning tiredly away from the desk. “And here was me thinking laying out a ballroom was as straightforward a task as you could get – apparently, I was wrong.”

“You plannin’ a weddin’ reception on top of everythin’ else, Dallas?” Ray asked, cheekily. “I guess tryna’ win the Walker Cup just wasn’t enough work, huh?!”

Dallas let out a deep, bassy chuckle. “You know what? Going on what I’ve seen so far?” he said, a much-needed smile lighting up his face. “I think planning a wedding would actually be a walk in the park compared to being captain – and, bear in mind, that’s coming from a guy whose wife made him meet with not one, not two, but three different wedding planners when we were getting hitched!”

Ray and Mustang both laughed. From speaking with Beau, they’d learned that for as big a character as Dallas was, his wife, Simone Rugger, was every bit as larger-than-life as he was; so much so, in fact, that – according to Beau, at any rate – though Dallas towered over her diminutive 5-foot frame, Simone was, and always had been, the one in charge of their marriage. Whatever Simone said? That was the law. And for 40-plus years? Dallas had been happy to keep his nose clean.

“What’s happening in that ballroom is why I actually came up here in the first place, though …” said Dallas, returning to the business-at-hand as he expelled the final few chuckles from his system. “I’m throwing a special dinner tonight to celebrate the beginning of the week; you know, give all the players and caddies a chance to meet and just relax before we get down to work tomorrow. And the two of you are invited, obviously.

“Yeah, cool!” said Mustang, feeling a heady mix of both nervous and excited at the prospect of his brand new evening plans. “That sounds great!”

“Yeah, should be good,” added Ray, sounding just as excited as Mustang had. “We’ll be there.”

“Glad to hear it,” smiled Dallas, taking a few small steps towards leaving. “Well, it’s in the Magnolia Room, drinks start at 7 for those of age …” He looked over at Mustang. “Sorry, kid …” he said, commiserating dryly, before continuing with the details. “And make sure you bring your appetites, ‘cause the food? Well, all I’ll say is, I handpicked the menu myself, and let me tell ya, man, it’s gonna blow your min-…”

Before he could finish his sentence appropriately praising the positively delectable food that was going to be served up later that evening, Dallas’ phone, much to his annoyance, began to ring. “And that’s my cue to leave …” he sighed, pulling his phone back out of his pocket once more and looking disinterestedly at the screen. “But I’ll see you, boys, later, alright?”

Sending him on his way with a matching pair of small waves, Mustang and Ray watched as Dallas marched purposefully towards the door of the room, answering his phone just as he pulled it open. “Yeah, yeah, I’m coming!” he barked down the line, before the door closing in his wake muffled the rest of his conversation.

With the room now ‘Dallas free’ – and, once again, back to looking quite large – Mustang, feeling the need to take the weight off his feet, moved some of the clothes and hats out of the way, and sat down on the edge of the bed.

“Well, that settles it for me, anyway …” said Ray, his voice breaking the momentary void of silence that had followed Dallas’ abrupt departure.

“What does?” asked Mustang, confused as to what had drawn such a sudden and definitive-sounding statement out of Ray from, seemingly, thin air.

“If the USGA asks me to captain the Walker Cup team some day …” Ray explained, assuming a faux-contemplative tone as if he’d been sitting on the actual request for quite some time. “I think I’m gonna have to turn ‘em down – just too much work for my liking. What d’ya think?”

“Well, you know me, I’m not exactly one to make any rash decisions …” said Mustang, playing along with the joke before giving in to the sudden bout of tiredness he was feeling and flopping backwards onto the super comfortable bed. “So, I think I’m just gonna sleep on it for a while – like … a long while.”

Recognizing that Mustang was in dire need of some shut-eye, Ray stood up off the chaise longue and grabbed his bag. “Good idea, kid …” he smiled as he opened the door that led through to his adjoining room, hopes of finding an equally large and comfortable-looking bed there now to the forefront of his mind. “I think I’ll join ya.”

*

With his stomach still feeling as though it was about to burst in the best possible way courtesy of the, as advertised, ‘mind-blowing’ food that had been served at Dallas’ welcome dinner, a sluggish-feeling Mustang finished hanging up his dress shirt, tie, and slacks.

In one of the many emails Ray had received from Dallas’ team of vice-captains in the weeks leading up to them heading to Florida, one email, in particular, had stated the requirement for each player and caddie on the team to bring ‘formal clothing’ with them. When Jeanie had found out that the most ‘formal’ thing Mustang owned was his school uniform, however, she’d promptly gone shopping in New Malo and picked up the required clothes for him – as well as some for Ray. “Now, after you’ve worn these?” she’d said, her warning still as fresh in Mustang’s mind as that evening she’d rocked up to their house with an armful of bags. “Make sure you hang them, ok?” Of course, given Jeanie was currently all the way back in Marais des Voleurs, Mustang knew he could just as easily throw them over the back of the chaise longue and be done with it. But he liked Jeanie. And given she’d gone to the trouble of getting the stuff for him in the first place, the least he could do was take care of them.

Just as he hooked the hangar over the shiny, chrome bar running across the width of the wardrobe in his room, however, Mustang’s attention was drawn to the sound of his phone beginning to ring. Feeling a few flutters of panic in his stomach at the thought of who and why someone might be calling at this time of the night – what with it being just a few minutes past midnight – Mustang closed the doors of the wardrobe, walked briskly back over to his bed, and grabbed his phone. Upon seeing that it was just Donny looking to video call him, though, all feelings of panic quickly abated for Mustang and he answered the phone, silencing his ringtone that seemed obnoxiously loud at this late hour.

“Hey, man,” said Mustang, the faintest hint of relief colouring his voice as Donny’s face filled the screen of his phone.

“Hey, I’m not waking you up, am I?” Donny asked, sounding genuinely concerned that he’d perhaps roused Mustang from his sleep. “I know you’re an hour ahead, so I wasn’t sure if I should call or not.”

“Naw, you’re good,” said Mustang, reassuringly, as he climbed onto his bed and sat with his back up against the cushioned headboard. “I’m not long back from that dinner I was telling you about, so I’m just getting ready for bed now.”

“Aw, ok, cool,” said Donny, sounding noticeably more relaxed. “Cause that’s why I was calling, actually, I wanted to hear how it went – so, how was it?!”

Mustang could only smile. At Donny’s behest, Mustang had been sending him updates throughout the day about what he’d been doing; so, the flight down to Florida, the car ride to the hotel, what his room was like – Donny had seen it all, and it had served to only further build his excitement about the week ahead.

“Yeah, it was really good,” Mustang began, thinking back on the evening just gone. “The ballroom was really cool. The food was great. Oh, and they had these really nice things called ‘mocktails’ for the players who aren’t 21 yet – I ended up having, like, four of them and-…”

“Yeah, sorry – maybe I should have been a little clearer,” said a smiling Donny, cutting across Mustang before he could begin diving into the specifics of each mocktail he’d guzzled down with all the gusto of a dog lapping up water on a hot day. “When I asked ‘how was it?’, I meant, how was it meeting the rest of the team – I wasn’t looking for a detailed rundown on fancy drinks with little umbrellas in ‘em!”

“Alright, alright, I hear ya …” laughed Mustang, saving said ‘rundown’ of the mocktails for the next time he was talking to Jeanie – at least she’d appreciate it. “It was fine. I mean, we were all divided up between different tables, so the only people I really spoke to were the guys at my table.”

“And they were?!” Donny asked, impatient to hear the names of Mustang’s dinner companions. “Austin Andrade?! Axel Brogan?! Mason Sedgwick?! Oh! Wait! Don’t tell me you were sitting with Conrad Kennedy and Greyson Ortega, were ya?!”

Though Mustang felt as though his ‘golf knowledge’ had improved by leaps and bounds over the course of the summer, he knew that he was still languishing far behind that of Donny’s encyclopedia-like knowledge of all things golf-related. Whether it be the professional game or, as the past few weeks had shown, even the amateur game, there was nothing, seemingly, that Donny didn’t know. And how had Mustang come to learn this? Because from the moment they had become friendly enough for them to be talking freely about the Walker Cup, Donny had been acting almost like the unofficial biographer of the match by telling Mustang not only about every single member of the U.S. team, but the guys on the Great Britain & Ireland team as well.

Where each guy played their college golf? What tournaments had they won? What guys had the best chance of turning pro? What tours were each of those then planning on plying their trade on? Donny knew it all. In fact, if Mustang had been so inclined, he was pretty sure that if he’d wanted to know what each of his teammates ate for breakfast, Donny would have somehow come up with the answer for him.

“No, I wasn’t with any of them,” Mustang answered, seeing Donny’s enthusiasm deflate ever-so-slightly as he knew how much he admired Conrad and Greyson, given he, himself, had aspirations of going to Stanford just like them. “Austin, Axel, and Mason were with … uh … what’s the name of the guy who won the Mid-Am?”

“Miles Radford,” sighed Donny, amazed that Mustang still couldn’t remember Miles’ name even after spending the evening in the exact same room as him.

“Yeah, Miles,” continued Mustang, making a quick mental note of his name to make sure he didn’t forget it again. “And as for Conrad and Greyson? They were holed up with Fletcher and, surprise-surprise, Byron.”

“Cause, of course, he found a way to end up at their table,” said Donny, having heard enough about the infamous Byron from Mustang to share the same sense of irritation at his blatant attempt to get ‘in’ with the most influential members on the team. “Did he say anything to you?”

“That he did …” said Mustang, sarcastically teeing up his response. “I went over and said, ‘Hey, Byron, how are you?”, when he was ordering a drink; to which he then replied, ‘Get out of my face, Applejack, I’m busy’, before taking his glass of Diet Mountain Dew and walking off. So, a pretty good chat, all things considered.”

“Well, at least, he’s going to the trouble of actually calling you individual names of the ‘My Little Pony’ characters as opposed to just ‘My Little Pony’ like he used to before,” laughed Donny, his eyes continuing to flick back and forth from the screen of his phone and that of the video game he’d been playing since their video call started. “I mean, that’s progress, right?!”

“Oh, yeah, definitely,” said Mustang, faux-enthusiastically, as he readjusted his position on the bed. “I’d say give it ‘til Wednesday and we’ll be braiding each other friendship bracelets.”

Again, the image of a laughing Donny filled the vaguely smudged screen of Mustang’s phone. “So, going by the process of elimination,” he said, still quietly chuckling as he attempted to get their conversation – and his game – back on track. “I take it you were sitting with Blake Landor and Samson Hamada, then?”

“Yep,” replied Mustang. “They were quite cool, actually. I mean, we didn’t have much in common – given the two of them are, like, 20 and in college – but they seemed like nice dudes. Everyone did, really. To be honest, though, I’m just looking forward to getting out to Seminole tomorrow and actually seeing the course, you know? Cause it’s one thing reading about it and watching videos on it, but, at this stage, I just really want to get my spikes on the ground out there and actually play some golf.”

“No, yeah, for sure,” said Donny, dryly. “I mean, I can only imagine that the whole ‘staying in a 5-star hotel’ and ‘banquet dinners’ gets old real quick!”

Now it was Mustang’s turn to have his laughing face fill Donny’s screen.

 

Knock! Knock! Knock!

 

Hearing three sharp raps of someone’s knuckles against the door of his room, Mustang’s laughter was quickly replaced with a puzzled expression. If he’d thought it peculiar to be getting a phone call just after midnight, the idea of having a literal visitor to his room only a few minutes later was just downright strange.

“Did someone knock on your door?” asked Donny, he, too, sporting a similarly confused expression as that currently on Mustang’s face.

“Yeah …” answered Mustang, looking off in the direction of the door. “It’s probably just Dallas. Or one of the vice-captains. Either way, though, I better go.”

“Yeah, no, man, sure,” said Donny, understandingly. “Duty calls. Just make sure and send me some pictures of Seminole, though, alright? I mean, they’ll only make me more jealous than what I already am, but what can ya do?!”

“Alright, man, will do,” smiled Mustang, throwing his legs back down over the side of his bed and standing up. “Talk to you tomorrow.”

With Donny signing off with his standard mini salute, Mustang hung up his phone and tossed it back down onto his bed before making for the door of his room.

 

Knock! Knock! Knock!

 

With a noticeable hint of impatience in those three knocks, Mustang called out as he quickened his pace towards the door, his bare feet digging deep into the plush carpet with each hurried step. “Yeah, I’m coming …” he said. “Hold on …”

Finally reaching it, Mustang grabbed the handle and opened the door. As soon as he did this, however, and the heavy metallic click indicated the latch had been released, the door was thrust violently back, throwing it open to the dimly-lit hallway outside. Stunned into inaction by what had just happened, Mustang tried to regroup and regain control of his senses – but whoever was outside the door had other plans. 

Feeling, what felt like, several arms grab him roughly by his pyjama top, Mustang was yanked out through the door of his room. He tried to get a glimpse at who was behind what was happening, but between the disorientation at having his door thrown back and his hair falling down into his eyes, Mustang couldn’t see a thing. And that was only about to get worse. After getting a piece of duct tape slapped across his mouth, Mustang felt a bag of some description getting pulled down over his head, casting him into complete and utter darkness.

Before he knew it, Mustang was then being picked up by two people – one grabbing him by his legs, the other taking his arms.

Whoever “they” were, they then began to move briskly down the hallway; carting Mustang away with them like a kill after a successful hunt.

He tried to fight. To struggle against their grasp. But it was no use. Their grips were just too tight.

What was happening now was simple.

Black and white.

Wherever Mustang was being taken? He was going there … like it or not.

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    1. Hey Zewa,

      Delighted to hear it! By right, I should go back to a set time for publishing the new chapters, but in doing that, I’d rob everyone of the fun of “Refresh Saturday”! 😂

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  1. “What was happening now was simple.

    Black and white.

    Wherever Mustang was being taken? He was going there … like it or not.”

    The end lines are always killer killer lines i love it

    1. Hey Dessie,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed the ending as the final lines of the chapters are always something I pay particular attention to each week 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a comment, Dessie, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week – as always, it’s massively appreciated 🙏

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    1. Hey Trev,

      That’s really cool to hear! Because that’s how I want the story to be, you know? Something that’s just easy to pick up, yet interesting as well 😁

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    1. Hey Looie Looie,

      It’s great, isn’t it?! And what I love about it, is how it just happened organically! It’s like this properly secret club now! 😁

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    1. Hey Colm,

      Hahahaha, I know! I’d say I must go back to a set time for publishing the new chapters – make it easier for people … even if the idea of “Refresh Saturday” is cool! 😁

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  2. “Holy cow!” he exclaimed, nearly tripping over his jaw as he walked hesitantly inside. “No way this is where I’m staying!”

    i really liked this bit

    1. Hey Aidan,

      I’m glad you liked that bit as well because when I wrote that line last weekend I was thinking it was a good solid start to the new chapter and set the ball rolling nicely for me 😁

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      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed the chapter – and, of course, that you decided to rep the Mustang Gang with some merch! ✊🐎

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    1. Hey Quentin,

      As the saying goes, “The early bird catches the worm”! Delighted you enjoyed the chapter, though 👍

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    1. Hey Cornell,

      I’m really glad you’re enjoying the chapters! This chapter happened to be a particularly meaty one! To answer your question, though, no, I don’t have the chapters done in advance. I write each chapter from scratch every week. So, I’ll be starting next week’s chapter this afternoon, work all week on it, publish next Saturday, and then start the process all over again 😁

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    1. Hey mg1987,

      ✊🐎 – another member of the gang makes themselves known! 😁

      Thanks very much for your comment, MG, and, of course, for supporting the story – it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  3. ==In one of the many emails Ray had received from Dallas’ team of vice-captains in the weeks leading up to them heading to Florida, one email, in particular, had stated the requirement for each player and caddie on the team to bring ‘formal clothing’ with them. When Jeanie had found out that the most ‘formal’ thing Mustang owned was his school uniform, however, she’d promptly gone shopping in New Malo and picked up the required clothes for him – as well as some for Ray. “Now, after you’ve worn these?” she’d said, her warning still as fresh in Mustang’s mind as that evening she’d rocked up to their house with an armful of bags. “Make sure you hang them, ok?” Of course, given Jeanie was currently all the way back in Marais des Voleurs, Mustang knew he could just as easily throw them over the back of the chaise longue and be done with it. But he liked Jeanie. And given she’d gone to the trouble of getting the stuff for him in the first place, the least he could do was take care of them.==

    I can see this like it’s a montage in a movie.

    1. Hey Regga Man,

      That’s a really great thing to hear because I think that’s the ultimate goal for anyone writing anything: when people read your stuff can they see it in their heads – so, I’m delighted you can 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time and effort to leave such a positive comment, Regga Man, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Graham,

      ✊🐎

      I love how those two simple emojis have not only taken on a meaning of their own but, in themselves, are all that needs to be said at the same time! It’s just very cool 😁

      Thank you for the comment, Graham, and, as always, for continuing to come back every week – you know yourself that it’s massively appreciated on my end 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Kevin,

      That’s fantastic to hear! It’s always great to know that people are looking forward to reading the next installment! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Kevin, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week – I really appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Vicky,

      I bet you didn’t see that coming! Glad you liked it, though! 😁

      Thank you for the, as always, positive comment, Vicky, and for continuing to come back every week – as always, it’s hugely appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Alice,

      Delighted you liked it! It came out of left field, didn’t it?! 😁

      Thank you very much for your positive comment, Alice, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week – it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Evan,

      Bit of a surprise, right?! Delighted you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very much for your positive comment, Evan, and for your continued support as well – as always, it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Roha,

      Well, as tempting as pulling an all-nighter to get the next chapter done by tomorrow sounds, I think I might still give myself until next Saturday 😂 I’m delighted you’re enjoying it, though 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Roha, and, of course, for supporting the story as you are – it really does mean a lot to me 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey BogeyHunter,

      😂😂😂

      I mean, I knew we were getting under their skin – I knew that. But I never thought they’d stoop this low. It will not, however, go without retaliation. Gather the rest of the gang. We march on Hogwarts in the morning 😂

      Thank you very much for your comment, BH (it, genuinely, made me laugh out loud), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – as always, it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

    2. They abduct our golf boy, we take two of their wizards. they do not know what they have started here. wands about to be broken -mustang-gang-

      1. Hey MGM🇱🇺,

        😂😂😂

        Look, I know tempers are frayed right now – I, myself, have been in the grips of a white-hot rage since morning – but we need to be clever here. Let’s not forget that we are still dealing with wizards; one flick of the wrist and someone saying, “Avada Kedavra” and we lose half our forces before we even get to the dining hall. So, what I suggest is a more stealthy approach. I take two fourballs and we enter Hogwarts through the Chamber of Secrets. If we can? We find Mustang and get out of there. If not? We take two wizards and maybe a teacher too if we can swing it. The Potterheads have left us no alternative. If they want to go down into the mire … then into the mire the Mustang Gang shall go.

        Thank you very, very much for your comment, MGM🇱🇺 (that’s had me laughing on & off for the last 15 mins), and, of course, for continuing to support the story every week – as always, it’s massively appreciated 🙏

        ✊🐎

        Stephen F. Moloney

        1. I saw an owl last night so i think the potterheads have the MGang under surveillance. Next one i see i’m taking him out.

          1. Hey Reem,

            😂😂😂

            Oh, they 100% do have us under surveillance – hence why I’ve been screaming at stray cats to reveal their true wizard form to me since January. Credit to them, though, none have broken thus far, choosing, instead, to run off into nearby bushes. So, say what you will about the Potterheads, but they have solid recruits – unyielding in their commitment to the cause. And whilst I appreciate the offer, I’m actually this close to having the owls switch their allegiance to the Mustang Gang – they’ve heard good things about how much we covet birdies and eagles, so I’ve spun a rather ambitious yarn where, for their loyalty, I’m going to somehow convince the R&A to change the name of ‘a par’ to ‘an owl’. If I can make it happen it could swing the fate of the war.

            Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Reem (it gave me a good laugh), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

            Stephen F. Moloney

            ✊🐎

        1. Hey Teddy,

          I’m the same … even if they can sometimes lead to quite a severe escalation in our long-running turf war with the Potterheads 😂

          Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Teddy, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

          Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Neill,

      Hahahaha, years upon years of watching ‘Home & Away’ have taught me well 😂 Delighted you’re enjoying it, though 👍

      Thank you very much for the, as always, positive comment, Neill, and for your continued support week-to-week – as you know yourself, it’s hugely appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey GB,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed it! It’s always cool to know that an ending to a chapter has gone down well! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, GB, and, of course, for supporting the story as you are – it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Guss,

      Hahahaha, well, given making that happen would require a herculean effort on my part to somehow get an entire chapter written in just over 12 hours, I’m afraid I’m going to have to confiscate your clipboard, pen, and all other petition-related material! 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Guss (I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week as well – as always, the support really is appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Nev,

        I’m afraid that won’t be possible, unfortunately, as Guss surrendered his clipboard and pen … unless, of course, he went behind my back and printed out another sign-up sheet? TELL ME THE TRUTH! 😂

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Nev, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Broffy,

      Delighted you enjoyed it! I was hoping it would be one that would catch people by surprise! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Broffy, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  4. I arrived home from work tonight looking forward to this chapter and i now im done i just want the next one. i’m hooked. it’s a digital pageturner 👌

    1. Hey Henrick,

      That’s really cool to hear that reading the chapter is something you were looking forward to after a day at work! I’m just delighted that you’re enjoying it so much! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Henrick, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Wayne,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! I was hoping it would catch people off-guard! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave, as always, such a positive comment, Wayne, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – as you know yourself, I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  5. The streak of great posts continue. I, like others, cannot wait until the next instalment.

    jools

    1. Hey Jools,

      That’s such a cool thing to hear! I’m really glad you’ve been enjoying everything you’ve been reading! I’m currently working on the next chapter as we speak, so next Saturday’s installment is in my sights! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Jools, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Evelyn,

      Yeah, it’s like a call to how people knocking on Mustang’s door during the chapter led to such important events; but then it’s also a play on that saying, “Knock on wood”, which is something you say when you hope for some good luck to continue. Well, in this chapter, things had been going really well for Mustang, and when he had the first knock at his door, it was just Dallas coming to talk to him and Ray. When the second knock happened, though, he ended up getting taken – thus, meaning, that particular ‘knock on wood’ ended his good luck. Hope that explains it clearly enough 👍

      Thank you very, very much for your question, Evelyn, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  6. This is a new Saturday ritual for me. I am a new reader but I’ve spent the last few weeks catching up. This is an excellent story and you should be very proud of what you have made here.

    1. Hey Oliver,

      Well, first of all, you’re very welcome! And, secondly, that is such a lovely thing to hear – I’m just really glad you’re enjoying the story! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Oliver, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Hope you keep enjoying the story! 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

  7. Roll on next week. Is it always on Saturday? Three big fans are in this house for your work

    1. Hey Selma,

      That’s so cool to hear! I’m delighted you’re all enjoying it! To answer your question, though, yes, new chapters go up every Saturday; generally, it can be at any point before 12-noon Irish time 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Selma, and, of course, for continuing to support the story every week – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Hilton,

      That really is fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Hilton, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  8. Got my hat last week . It’s some real quality and it goes well with the book. I’m a big fan of your writing.

    1. Hey Rian,

      That’s all really great to hear; I’m delighted you’re enjoying the story and happy with your hat 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Rian; for continuing to read the story every week; and, of course, for purchasing one of the hats – that level of support really does help me out a lot, so, it’s massively appreciated 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  9. I thought i was reading a different book there towards the end! A proper cliffhanger. You’re so good at this. Buying this book when it’s out.

    1. Hey Ube,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed it! I was hoping the end would catch people by surprise! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Ube (it made my day), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Mustang Gang Gal,

      ✊🐎

      Nothing more needs to be said! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, MGGal, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – the support is absolutely amazing and I’m truly grateful for it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey WF,

      I’m delighted you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, WF; for continuing to read the story every week; and, of course, for purchasing a book as well – that kind of support really does help me out tremendously, so, I very much appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Greg,

      Welcome! Delighted to hear that you not only gave the story a chance, but that you’re enjoying it as well! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Greg, and, of course, for supporting the story – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Apexlege,

        Welcome as well! That’s really cool to hear, though, that it came as part of an assignment – if there’s a quiz on it, hopefully, your teacher won’t make the questions too difficult! 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Apexlege, and, of course, for reading the story every week (even if you have to for school! 😂) – I really do appreciate it 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

  10. I love the exciting ending! I’m hoping it’s just a team prank or else the mustangang will have to get the strike team out.

    Keep up the good work

    1. Hey Bryce,

      I’m delighted you liked the ending! I was hoping it would catch a lot of people off guard! 😁 And that’s the good thing about the Mustang Gang strike team … they’re always ready to be deployed. Except on Saturdays, of course, as that’s when the new chapters come out 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time, as always, to leave such a positive comment, Bryce, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – as you know, I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

  11. This has been better and better each week. I’m a big fan. Keep it up

    #MustangGangGermany

    1. Hey Viktor,

      That is really fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Viktor, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇩🇪

      Stephen F. Moloney

  12. I spent the last two weeks going from the very first chapter to this one. Very very good. I am now a big supporter of this book.

    1. Hey Mei,

      That is fantastic to hear! You’ve done a lot of reading over the last two weeks! I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story, though! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Mei, and, of course, for supporting the story – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      🇯🇵🇯🇵🇯🇵

      Stephen F. Moloney

  13. v dramatic start to my morning commute! I found one of my work colleagues also reading this last week. We golf regularly now that we can again but had not spoken about this website! There are “mustang gang” everywhere!

    1. Hey Ollie,

      I was hoping that would be the effect! That’s amazing how you and your colleague were both reading the story at the same time and didn’t even know it, though! By right I should come up with a secret handshake that Mustang Gang members can identify each other with! 😁 🤝🤜🤛👊👊🤘 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ollie, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇩🇪

      Stephen F. Moloney

  14. I am reading this from Argentina… I just want to add my flag to the list ! 🇦🇷

    ¡Vamos Mustang!

    1. Hey Javier,

      That is really cool to hear! Well, you can consider your flag officially added to the list! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Javier, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Vamos Mustang! 🇦🇷🇦🇷🇦🇷

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

    1. Hey Mustang in Mex,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! And as I’m currently writing next week’s chapter, I, too, am thinking hard about it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, MIM, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Vamos Mustang! 🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

      1. Hey Bodi,

        That’s the great thing about the Mustang Gang! Just when you think you’re the only one, there’s always another member waiting around the corner to be found! 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Bodi, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Vamos Mustang y viva el Mustang Gang en México!!! ✊🐎🇲🇽

        Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Heavy Parson,

      You’re very welcome, but I’m just delighted to hear that you’re enjoying the story – it’s always cool to know that what I’m writing is something that people are looking forward to reading 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, HP, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

  15. If was turned into a game this would be a bonus level where Mustang turns into Streets of Rage where he has to beat up masked ninjas with golf gear.

    1. Hey Renn,

      😂😂😂

      That would be unreal! With each club having a different set of abilities and attributes! Get a ‘Hotline Miami-esque’ soundtrack over it, with Jim Nantz doing voiceover work for phrases like “Nice combo!” and “Finish him!” 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Renn (I got a good kick out of it!), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  16. I started re-reading this a week ago after dipping out of it. Now I’m really into it again. I really like the golf chapters. So happy you are still writing it.

    1. Hey Ian,

      That’s brilliant to hear! Welcome back! I’m glad you’re enjoying it! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ian, and, of course, for giving the story another chance – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Crenshaw,

      That’s really great to hear! I’m delighted you’re enjoying the story! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Crenshaw, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Mustang Gang LA,

      ✊🐎

      Nice to see some more members in the City of Angels! Unless, of course, ‘LA’ is an abbreviation for Louisiana … but I’m guessing it’s Los Angeles! 😁

      Either way, thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, MGLA, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Dutchy Dijk,

      I’m delighted you enjoyed it! I was hoping it would catch people by surprise! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Dutchy Dijk, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      It’s always great to hear from more fans in the Netherlands! ✊🐎🇱🇺

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Valiant,

      Yeah, I think that would probably be for the best! 😁 However, I’ll be launching a means to make it a bit easier to catch up on past chapters either tonight or early tomorrow, so keep an eye out for that!

      Thank you very, very much for your comment, though, Valiant, and, of course, for giving the story a chance – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      ✊🐎

  17. I did not know what the mystang gang was! but then I went back and checked and then I got it.

    I will get a hat this week

    1. Hey Harriet,

      Yeah, the Mustang Gang kinda happened out of nowhere – it was a nice surprise to see it take off! I’m really glad you got to the bottom of what it meant, though! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Harriet; for coming back to read the story every week; and, of course, for being interested in buying one of the hats – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Neville,

      That’s really cool to hear! I’m delighted you liked it – as you can probably see from the comments it caught a lot of people by surprise! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Neville, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – as you know by now, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Preet,

      It’s so cool to see that the Mustang Gang has reached Suriname! That really is one of the best parts about writing Mustang, just seeing how far around the world the story actually gets after I write it here in Ireland and hit the publish button on a Saturday. Mind-blowing! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Preet, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇸🇷

      Stephen F. Moloney

  18. My friend gave the site to me in the last two weeks … and i have really enjoyed it… i would like to read more .. I am writing from India.

    1. Hey Suley,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m really delighted that you’ve been enjoying the story! I publish a new chapter every Saturday, so that’s when you’ll be able to read the next part of the story 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Suley, and, of course, for reading the story as well – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇮🇳

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Felix,

      Yeah, the ending was a bit surprising, wasn’t it?! The good thing about Mustang, though, is that he’s as tough as nails, so, he can handle himself in any situation! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Felix, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    2. It was actually a little scary. I am hoping next week has a happy ending so my little man can relax! 😅

      1. Hey Misha,

        Oh no! I’m sorry! Well, if it helps to alleviate any concerns before Saturday, as I said to Felix, Mustang is as tough as nails, so that should help him! 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Misha, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Elf,

      That is fantastic to hear! I’m really glad that you’re enjoying it – and from all the way up in Iceland, no less! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Elf, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇮🇸

      Stephen F. Moloney

  19. Es tan bueno ver a otros mexicanos aquí. Pensé que podría haber sido el único lector. ¿Alguien quiere jugar al golf conmigo de verdad? ¡Amo a Mustang!

    1. Hey Xannza,

      It’s great to hear from another member of the Mexican Mustang Gang! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying the story! 😁 I feel I should say this, though (the one-time teacher in me can’t help it) while it’s really cool that you want to find people to play actual golf with in real life, be really careful about looking to do that on the internet and in somewhere like a comments section – it’s probably not the best way to find some buddies for a fourball. Now, you might have just been saying it for fun, but I just felt the need to say something – so, please, don’t take any offence! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Xannza (love the name, by the way), and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Vamos Mustang y viva el Mustang Gang en México! ✊🐎🇲🇽

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Hadid,

      I had nothing to do with that satellite going down! I swear! I have an alibi and everything! The other members of the Mustang Gang will vouch for me! 😳😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Hadid, and, of course, for continuing to read (and reread!) the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  20. Hello, I began to read this because my Uncle suggested it but now i really like it for real and I read it every monday when i get back from homework club.

    1. Hey Sam,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m really glad that you’re enjoying the story – good work by your uncle! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Sam, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week (and especially so when you get home from homework club) – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  21. Logged back on after a few months and I’ve just burned through 1-16 of the new story in three days! It’s been wild but I love it. It’s really improved so much and I mean that in the best way possible. The world is bigger and more lively than before. I normally don’t like the “next” book in any genre but this is great.

    1. Hey Josh,

      Welcome back! Yeah, the second book is proving quite popular, in fairness, and for many of the reasons you mentioned – so, well spotted! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Josh, and, of course, for giving the story another chance – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Russia Remi,

      That’s really brilliant to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! Well, speaking for myself, I’m really glad that today isn’t Saturday because I don’t have the next chapter finished yet! 😅

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Russia Remi, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇷🇺

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Han,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m really happy that you’re enjoying the story! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Han, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  22. I’ve been enjoying the new Mustang story very much. Mustang is not an irritating character himself so it is very easy to read. Often it is not the case that characters are not annoying so this is a good thing.

    1. Hey Hiroshi,

      That’s such a cool thing to hear because I know exactly what you’re talking about; sometimes, main characters can be quite annoying, so making sure that Mustang isn’t that way, is something I really pay a lot of attention to 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Hiroshi, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  23. 你好,我正在写一条非常快的消息,让你知道我从 1 到 16 是多么喜欢阅读这篇文章。

    1. Hey LI,

      I’m really happy that you enjoyed the story 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, LI, and, of course, for reading the story also – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      谢谢你。

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Charlie,

      Yeah, it was definitely a surprise ending! The good thing about Mustang, though, is that he’s as tough as they come – so, whatever has happened, he knows how to look after himself 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a nice comment, Charlie, and, of course, for continuing to read the story – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      I hope you enjoy the next chapter 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Hector,

      Delighted to get the seal of approval! I’m really happy you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave a positive comment, Hector, and, of course, for continuing to read the story as well – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Deen,

      Don’t worry, Mustang is as tough as nails – so, whatever has happened, he’ll be able to handle himself! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Deen, and, of course, for reading the story as well – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      谢谢你。

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Olund,

      No need to worry, Mustang is as tough as they come – he can handle himself no matter what happens 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Olund, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  24. Thank you for riting this. I have been in the hospitl for the last few weeks and i have enjoyed reading this for over that time.

    1. Hey Julian,

      You’re very welcome; I’m just happy to hear that I’ve been able to give you something to do while you’ve been in hospital 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Julian, and, of course, for reading the story as well – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      I hope you get better soon!

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Garry,

      Hahahaha, of course! The now traditional “F5 Saturday” or “Refresh Saturday” – a hallowed tradition amongst Mustang readers! What I will say, though, is that chances are the new chapter will be up quite early again tomorrow, so you can bear that in mind 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Garry, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week as well – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hopefully, you’ll actually like the next chapter now after waiting a week for it!

      Stephen F. Moloney

        1. Hey Vewt,

          You know what? As much as I love the tradition of “Refresh Saturday”/”F5 Saturday”, I’ll say this about tomorrow’s chapter to make things a little easier on people: I’ll try to publish it in and around 9 a.m. Irish time – let the heralds spread that news far and wide! 😁

          Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Vewt, and, of course, for continuing to read the story every week – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

          Hope you enjoy the next chapter 👍

          Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Ren,

        Taking part in “Refresh Saturday” is a hallowed tradition amongst Mustang readers! 😂 I’m hoping to publish the next chapter in and around 9.am Irish time tomorrow, though, so that should, hopefully, remove some of the mystery – plus, it’ll save your fingers from hitting F5 too much 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ren, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Hope you enjoy the next chapter 👍

        Stephen F. Moloney

  25. I did not golf for many years because I was quite depressed in my regular life. Since reading Mustang, my love for the game has re-ignited. The shirts and book I bought were some of the best things I have done. Thank you for your story.

    1. Hey Harold,

      You’re very welcome, but, to be honest, hearing that something I wrote has helped reignite your love for golf? Well, that really is incredibly humbling to hear – that’s made my evening now! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Harold; for continuing to read the story every week; and, of course, for making those purchases that you have done – I really do hope you understand how big a deal it is for me to receive such tremendous support and how truly appreciative I am for it 🙏

      Hope you enjoy the next chapter! 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Keith,

      New chapters go up every Saturday. So, tomorrow, I’d be expecting the next chapter to be going live on the site in and around 9 a.m. Irish time 👍

      Thank you very much for your question, Keith, and, of course, for reading the story in the first place – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Hope you enjoy the new chapter 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

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