CHAPTER SEVENTEEN: ALTERNATE REALITY

Though the temperature outside the Breakers was still pleasantly mild despite the late hour, with the height of adrenaline still coursing through his system following the abduction, Mustang couldn’t help but shiver as he sat on the rear seat of the golf cart he’d been loaded onto a few minutes previously. 

After being carried through the hotel by his captors  – a journey which had seen them hurriedly descend several flights of stairs in order to avoid detection – once the heavy clunk of a fire exit being opened gave way to the far-off sound of the crashing waves from which the Breakers derived its name, Mustang had feared for the worst. Once he found himself being bundled onto the back of a golf cart as opposed to inside some windowless van, however, not only had Mustang’s fears been somewhat allayed as to what was actually happening to him but, more importantly, he began to get the faintest of inklings as to who might be behind this plot to kidnap him. 

When Dallas had mentioned how the Great Britain & Ireland team had already arrived at the hotel the previous night when he dropped by his room not long after he and Ray had checked-in, Mustang hadn’t given it a second’s thought – after all, as Ray had explained to him, even at the Ryder Cup it was common for both teams to reside in the same hotel. But between being whisked away on one of the many golf carts he’d seen zipping around the property when he and Ray had been approaching the hotel via its impressive red-brick drive earlier that day, and the fact his kidnappers had been very careful not to say a single word – either to him or to one another – since they burst through his door and snatched him, Mustang, with each second that passed, only became more convinced that it was, indeed, Desmond Finch’s charges who were responsible for this unwanted midnight excursion out into the Florida night.

After feeling the body of the golf cart momentarily shudder as it bumped down off the silky smooth path it had been travelling along, and then hearing the unmistakable muffled roll of the tyres beginning to slip effortlessly across quite a large swathe of grass, Mustang – though highly disorientated on account of the bag still firmly placed over his head – would have bet any money that their little covert joyride had now taken to the fairways of the adjoining 18-holes at the Breakers, the aptly named, Ocean Course.

While waiting to head down to the Magnolia Room earlier that evening, Mustang, in a bid to keep himself busy, had read all about the Ocean Course while idly flicking through the ‘welcome packet’ that had come with his room. And while he’d expressed an interest to Ray in paying a visit to the recently renovated track before they went home to Louisiana, doing so in the middle of the night with a bag over his head, duct tape on his mouth, and his hands bound together with a cable tie wasn’t quite what he’d envisioned when he originally floated the idea.

Having traversed what felt like two or three hundred yards, the speed at which they did so illustrating that whoever was driving appeared to be smuggling lead in the soles of their shoes, both Mustang and his stomach were relieved to feel the cart finally come to a stop. Before he could get a chance to recalibrate his slightly spinning head, however, Mustang felt the all-too-familiar grasp of the person who’d been sat alongside him since they got onto the cart grabbing him roughly by the arm and pulling him to his feet; the grass neatly trimmed and damp under Mustang’s toes on account of the fine layer of dew that had collected on it since sundown.

Despite the less-than-ideal circumstances, Mustang couldn’t help but afford himself a wry smile beneath the duct tape.

The last time he’d been barefoot like this on a golf course was the night he first met Ray on the range at the Creek. At that point he’d already been sleeping in Maisie for a few days; he was rapidly running out of food; and, from a golfing perspective, he’d never played even a single hole. Now, though barefoot on a golf course once again, here he was just four months removed from that night, staying in one of the most luxurious hotels in Florida; after spending the evening eating eight whole courses-worth of food that probably cost more than what his and his mother’s rent used to be when she was still alive; and he was doing it all as part of the U.S. Walker Cup team. 

And in that moment, Mustang realized something incredibly powerful.

If the Great Britain & Ireland boys were, indeed, behind this whole escapade as he suspected they were, then if this was merely an effort on their part to somehow rattle him or get a psychological point up on the board ahead of the weekend’s action, then Mustang wasn’t going to give them an ounce of satisfaction for their efforts. Whatever their endgame was? He wasn’t going to be nervous. And he wasn’t going to be scared. After all, given everything he’d been through to even end up in a position to be taken by the likes of ‘The Six’, as far as Mustang was concerned, there was nothing they could possibly do that could break him. He’d seen the worst that life had to offer and been through things that he wouldn’t wish on any member of the Great Britain & Ireland team – even with the whole kidnapping thing. So, in Mustang’s mind, he was bulletproof. And if ‘The Six’ had thought otherwise? Then they didn’t really have a clue what they’d let themselves in for when they’d knocked on Mustang Peyton’s door.

With a tug of his arm telling him that it was time to start walking, Mustang stumbled forward into the darkness as he tried to keep up with the rushed pace being set by his guide. After only taking but a few staggered steps, however, Mustang’s heightened senses began to give him the impression that wherever they were walking, they were not alone. In the chaos of being taken from his room and lugged through the hotel, Mustang had figured out that, at most, it had been a three-man job: two to deal with him, and then one to handle the many, many doors that stood between them and the outside of the hotel. Now, though, be it down to instinct or intuition, Mustang just couldn’t shake the feeling that those numbers had swollen – and swollen quite dramatically at that.

Feeling even more confident about his theory that the finger of blame should be pointed squarely at the Great Britain & Ireland team given he appeared to be walking out in front of a crowd, Mustang readied himself for the real show to begin as he felt the texture of the ground change beneath his feet from that of the slightly fuzzy grass one would find on a fairway to the firm, smooth turf of a green. His guide brought their midnight stroll to a stop. The curtain was about to go up. Mustang could feel it in his bones. But he was ready. 

Before he knew what was happening, Mustang felt a large hand grab the top of the bag that had been placed over his head and yank it sharply off. Having grown accustomed to the darkness, a disorientated Mustang could only squint through half-open eyes as he tried to acclimatize to being able to see again – even going so far as to keep his gaze focused straight down at the ground to try and aid with their recovery. For the first few blinks, all he could see were lights. Warm, yellowish lights casting a series of long shadows across the tightly-mown surface of a green – though, where said lights were emanating from remained a mystery. He looked off to his right. There was water. A lake of some description; the exact boundaries of its murky depths unclear on account of there being no visible moon out. Thanks to the trails of whatever lights were being used to illuminate the green, however, Mustang could just about pick up the movement of the water as it gently bobbed up and down – clearly, though he couldn’t feel it, there must have been the faintest of faint breezes blowing across its glassy, inky black surface.

With his eyes now picking up more and more detail with each passing blink, Mustang, finally, lifted his head warily up out of his chest and looked straight ahead across the green. Immediately, though, he didn’t like what he saw. Being backlit by the headlights of two golf carts parked in the rough at the rear of the green – themselves revealing what the source of the other lights was – there stood two lone figures looking directly at Mustang, their faces completely obscured by the shadows. Though still bound together, Mustang brought his hands slowly up to his face and wiped the hair out of his eyes, itself feeling vaguely damp with sweat thanks to whatever material the bag had been made from. While eager to keep his eyes firmly locked on the two people standing on the green, Mustang afforded himself a second to glance quickly off to his left in order to get a read on how many other people were watching him. Like the ominous-looking pair on the green, the faces of the small audience who’d gathered for this late-night performance were also being hidden thanks to the backlighting of the four golf carts perched behind them with their headlights on.

This was a far worse scenario than what Mustang had imagined it was going to be. Even if he’d wound up not being as outnumbered as he’d thought he was going to be when first approaching the green, the atmosphere being created by those who had shown up was enough to put him firmly on-edge – suddenly, the challenge of ‘not breaking’ didn’t seem so straightforward.

“Well, if it isn’t the man himself, hah?!” said one of the figures on the green, his teasing tone immediately capturing Mustang’s attention and drawing his gaze back across the green. “The one and only ‘Mustang Peyton’ – well, I dunno about the rest of ye, lads, but I, for one, haven’t been this starstruck in God knows how long!”

Finn Hennessy. One of the ringleaders of ‘The Six’. After watching several self-serving interviews of his from the past two Walker Cups, Mustang would recognize his heavy Irish accent anywhere – Dublin, specifically, if he was remembering correctly. 

“Now, I do hope the boys here weren’t too rough with ya, were they?” Finn asked, affecting a faux-concerned tone as Mustang quietly took solace in the fact that he had, indeed, been right about ‘The Six’ being behind all this. “Cause I warned ‘em to take it easy – swear to God, I did.”

With the duct tape over his mouth preventing him from answering, Mustang could only glare witheringly in Finn’s direction. Though he still couldn’t make out his face, just going on the way his voice sounded, Mustang could tell Finn had that infamous grin of his plastered all over it. The grin that, for the last two Walker Cups, had never failed in riling up whatever American opponents had been placed in front of him. The grin that had seen him set up shop inside the heads of the American team and throw them completely off their game. And the very same grin that Mustang wanted nothing more than to wipe from his smug face.

“Oh, sure, would ya look at that?!” said Finn, clearly enjoying playing up to the people gathered off to the side of the green. “Here’s me askin’ ya a question when you’ve bloody duct tape over your mouth! Well, I guess we can blame that on the private jet lag, right, lads?!”

A ripple of laughter topped down onto the green courtesy of the people gathered on the small bank where they were standing – at least someone was enjoying the show. The only thing Mustang could wonder, though, was how much they’d be laughing if the rest of the American team knew what was happening right now? Somehow, he got the impression that if they all showed up out of the blue, charging down the fairway on their own fleet of golf carts, headlights scything through the darkness, things would get a whole lot less funny real quick.

“Finn’s right, though, can someone take care of that tape, please? I don’t want to be out here all night if I can help it.”

Mustang froze. Just like he had with Finn’s, he instantly recognized that voice. Not because it was the distinctive Scottish lilt of one of the Campbell Cousins, nor even the melodic camber of Maddox Breckon’s Welsh accent. No.

Instead, the reason Mustang recognized it was because he’d only heard it for the very first time earlier that night inside the decadent surrounds of the Magnolia Room, loudly ringing out from the table where Byron had been sitting.

Because it was that of Conrad Kennedy’s.

With his stunned brain still trying to work out what exactly was happening, Mustang barely noticed his guide move out from behind where he was standing and come to a stop alongside him. Though desperately trying to peer through the gloom in order to make sure that it was, in fact, Conrad who’d just spoken, Mustang couldn’t help himself from turning and looking at this other figure now standing next to him, towering over him by a good foot. Yet again, however, in doing just that Mustang’s confusion only grew all the stronger. Because as opposed to finding himself face-to-face with another member of ‘The Six’ or even one of the other guys who made up the Great Britain & Ireland team like Lawrence Kenningham or Henry Tatum, Mustang, instead, found himself looking Samson Hamada dead in the eye – one of the guys he’d just eaten dinner with not even two hours previously.

“This is probably gonna hurt, dude …” said Samson, a vague hint of commiseration in his voice as he carefully grabbed the corner of the duct tape stuck tight over Mustang’s mouth. “So … sorry.”

At that, Samson pulled hard on the tape, ripping it sharply off Mustang’s face in one fluid movement. Despite the unpleasant sensation radiating out from his top lip – the pain, of which, stung the corners of his eyes – Mustang had too many questions he needed answers for to remain silent now that he’d regained the power of speech.

“You’re behind this?” Mustang asked, looking at Samson first before turning his horrified, accusatory glare off across the green at Conrad and Finn. “And you?! With him?!

“Well, we can’t take all the credit,” replied Conrad, sounding thoroughly untroubled at how angry Mustang was as he and Finn began to walk a little closer to where he was standing, their faces becoming a little clearer with each step they took. “Isn’t that right, Axel? Angus?”

Having seen him gesture loosely off at the area of green behind him with the putter he was carrying in his hand akin to a cane, Mustang took this as his cue to turn around. Sure enough, just off the edge of the green, there stood Axel Brogan, another one of Mustang’s teammates, and Angus Black, one of the new members of the Great Britain & Ireland team – clearly, Samson’s two co-conspirators in snatching Mustang from his room.

“But why?” said Mustang, turning back around and looking at Conrad and Finn, both of whom were now no more than a few yards away from him. “Why do all this?! What’s the point?!”

“Look, I know this was your plan, CK …” said Finn, jumping in excitedly before Conrad could answer. “But would ya mind if I told ‘im?”

“Well, you are the guests this week …” mused Conrad, pretentiously. “So, I guess it would be somewhat remiss of me as host to deny such a request, now wouldn’t it? … You know what? Please, by all means – the floor is yours.”

“Ya see that right there?” replied Finn, looking thoroughly honoured as though Conrad had just performed the most gracious act he’d ever had the good fortune to witness in person. “The work of a true gentleman. You know, it’s things like that, CK – that selflessness – that make you the teamma-…”

“Oh my God! Get on with it!” barked Mustang, his patience finally running out as he couldn’t bear listening to Finn fawning over Conrad a second longer. “What am I doing here?! Cause if it’s just to listen to you two droning on and on?! Then if this is meant to be some kind of hazing or whatever, I think I’ve been punished enough.”

Though Finn, once again, did nothing more than flash a grin at him, Mustang could tell that this one was different. Because while his mouth may have been smiling, Finn’s eyes told another story. They were now a little wider, a little more fiery-looking. He didn’t like being spoken back to. Not one bit. And Mustang could tell. He’d landed a blow. Perhaps only a glancing one – but a blow, nonetheless.

“Fair enough …” said Finn, his tone now noticeably sharper. “No point beatin’ ‘round the bush, I suppose.” Continuing to keep his eyes firmly fixed on Mustang, Finn turned his head slightly and called over his shoulder to one of the people gathered off to the side of the green. “Alrigh’! Bring him down!”

While he’d have preferred to stay locked in his battle of wills with Finn, between the movement amongst the collection of people over by the carts and this mysterious “him” Finn had referenced, Mustang’s curiosity got the better of him and he couldn’t help but steal a glance at the side of the green; whoever – or whatever – was coming, he wanted to be as prepared as he could be.

Pretty quickly, though, as three shadowy figures began to make their way down the small embankment, becoming more and more illuminated by the headlights on the carts the closer they got to the green, not only did Mustang realize that he and the “him” in question had both found themselves as unwilling visitors to the Ocean Course that night – the cable tie around his wrists a dead giveaway of that particular fact – but, even more importantly, Mustang knew exactly who he was … Rodney.

“Ah, there he is!” said Finn, his trollsome spirit bucking back up as Greyson Ortega and Maddox Breckon brought a terrified-looking Rodney – himself clad in a pair of slippers and paisley-patterned pyjamas – to a stop alongside where he was standing. “Our hero-in-waitin’, hah?! Ain’t that right, Rodders?!”

Finn stuck out his hand and began patronizingly tousling Rodney’s already messy hair, its deep auburn colour now looking nothing more than a dark brown. Mustang could tell Rodney hated what Finn was doing. He tried to move his head away, to get out of Finn’s reach, but it was no use. Finn was looking to make an example of him. To humiliate him. And he was going to get his way – no matter how badly Mustang wanted to try and stop him.

“Just a gentle reminder, Finn, that the night isn’t getting any younger …” said Conrad, his patience beginning to wear thin with the lack of progress being made on account of Finn’s time-wasting. “So, let’s move it along, shall we?”

“Ah, sure, I’m just havin’ a bitta fun, CK!” replied Finn, finally bringing his hand down from Rodney’s hair.

“He’s right, though, Finn,” said Angus Black, suddenly piping up from behind Mustang, a note of slight concern colouring his strong Scottish accent. “I mean, this is great and all, but if Desmond or one of the VCs find out we’re not in our rooms? Then we’re all dead – and you know as well as I do that Desmond isn’t beyond sendin’ people home!”

“Shut your mouth, you!” spat Finn, his eyes darkening as they darted off in Angus’ direction. “A bleedin’ rookie?! Talkin’ to me like that?! The neck of ya! If you’re so worried about Desmond, you know where the hotel is! No one’s makin’ ya be here!

Having received his animated dressing down, a somewhat sheepish-looking Angus zipped his lip – he should have known better than to question Finn.

“Bloody rookies …” sighed Maddox, his exasperation with Angus clear to be heard.

“Alright, I’ve heard enough …” said Conrad, firmly putting his foot down as he catapulted himself back to the forefront of proceedings. “Guest or not, I don’t have all night.”

Though not happy to have lost his chance at performing the big reveal, Finn, nonetheless, yielded the floor back to Conrad – subtly revealing that, however small, there was a definite hierarchy at play here.

“Alright, listen up, because I’m only going to say this once,” Conrad began, his tone stern and to the point as he addressed Mustang and Rodney. “Now, as we’re all well aware, the two of you have been chosen by Desmond and Dallas to be the alternates for our respective teams this week. And for some people? They might be perfectly happy to accept that decision no questions asked. But for the rest of us? Those whose opinions actually matter? It ain’t as simple as that. See, in Stanford? Where the four of us play? You can get chosen to play for the golf team by the suits and the coaches, but until you prove yourself to us? You’re nothing but a poser. So, out of a shared sense of responsibility and respect for this great cup we’re about to play for, we want to see what you two are really made of.”

“Are you serious?!” Mustang snapped. “That’s what all this is about?! You drag us out here, put us through all this, just so we can somehow “prove ourselves” to you?!”

“Well, if I may …” said Greyson, politely interjecting for the first time, his purposefully altered Texan accent making each word sound as though he were attempting to speak a foreign language. “The whole kidnapping thing was just for our amusement; I mean, obviously, we could have just asked you to come out here but … well, where would the fun have been in that?”

Mustang could only shake his head in bemused disbelief. It had been one thing to discover that this whole plot had been a combined effort of both his own teammates and the ‘The Six’ – the rest of whom he imagined made up the remaining smattering of people standing at the side of the green. But to discover the actual reason behind it? Well, it just made Mustang furious.

“So, what is it you expect us to do?” Mustang growled, deciding it best to quell his anger – for the meantime, at least.

“It’s quite simple, really …” explained Conrad. “You each get one putt. You make it? You pass the test.”

“And if we don’t?” asked Rodney, summoning the courage to force the question out of his mouth.

“Well, in that instance, Rodders, that lucky boy will be goin’ for a little midnight dip, now won’t he?” Finn grinned, goadingly. “And going on what I know about you? I sincerely hope you can swim.”

Not feeling brave enough to say anything back to Finn, Rodney just averted his gaze and fixed it back down at the ground. Despite desperately trying to hide it, Mustang knew Finn’s slight had hurt Rodney – and quite badly, at that. From talking to him when they’d met at reception, Mustang could tell how excited Rodney was to be in Florida and to be a part of the Walker Cup team, even if it was just in the role of an alternate like he was. Yet, now, here he was just a few hours later, standing on a green just after midnight in nothing more than a pair of pyjamas and slippers, with Finn Hennessy – his supposed “teammate” for the week – mocking him. Even though he didn’t really know him, Mustang knew Rodney deserved better than this.

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!

Cutting sharply through the still night air, the unmistakable, high-pitched sound of a golf cart horn began to ring out from back down the fairway. Thinking that such a blatant announcement of one’s impending arrival wasn’t exactly in keeping with the clandestine tone of the night’s proceedings, a glimmer of hope deep inside Mustang’s stomach sparked into life. Was it Dallas? One of his vice-captains? Ray? Perhaps even Desmond Finch? Mustang didn’t care who it was. He just wanted whoever was driving this golf cart to be one of them so that they could put a stop to this nonsense cooked up by Conrad and Finn.

“Who’s this, then?” asked Maddox, suddenly sounding a touch nervous as he put his question to the group gathered on the green.

“I dunno …” answered Greyson, he, too, not sounding near as confident as he had done a few moments earlier. “What about you, CK? You know who that is?”

“No … no, I do not,” said Conrad, a sense of urgency infiltrating his voice as he watched the approaching cart chew up the turf between it and the green. “Samson? Get the cable ties off ‘em – now.”

Not needing to be told twice, Samson pulled a pocket knife from his pocket and moved hurriedly from Mustang to Rodney, snipping open the cable ties keeping their respective hands bound together. Feeling the relief of no longer having the stiff plastic the cable ties were made from digging into their wrists, Mustang and Rodney both turned their attention back down the fairway just in time to see the golf cart come to a stop next to the one which had been used to smuggle Mustang onto the course.

The driver killed the engine, quenching the headlights in the process.

Mustang peered through the darkness, tightly squinting his eyes as he eagerly tried to decipher who it was that had just arrived.

He saw a leg step out onto the grass.

It wasn’t Dallas.

He saw a second leg step out onto the grass.

It wasn’t Ray. And it wasn’t Desmond. 

But as far as Mustang was concerned, it was someone every bit as good.

Because it was none other than the U.S. Amateur Champion. The number one ranked amateur in the world. And, hands down, the best player on the American team.

It was Fletcher Rhodes.

“Well, well, well … evenin’ boys …” said Fletcher, moseying on up to the green with his hands buried in his pockets. “What do we have here, then?”

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    1. Hey Harry!

      😂

      You really were quick on the draw! I just hope your F5 button made it through relatively unscathed! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for, as always, leaving such a positive comment, Harry, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week – as you know, I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Deep,

      That’s such a cool thing to hear! I’m really glad you enjoyed it – with the way the last week’s chapter ended, I knew I had to follow it up with something good, so it’s nice to hear I delivered 👍

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  1. Mustang is so cool without being cringe. This was a great followup to last week.

    I’m glad I dropped by earlier today!

    1. Hey Evin,

      That is such a fantastic comment to see because ensuring Mustang is never cringe is something I’m always actively thinking about! Delighted you enjoyed the chapter too! 😁

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    1. Hey Frank,

      Delighted to hear you enjoyed it because I was really hoping to meet expectations after how last week’s chapter ended! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for, as always, leaving such a positive comment, Frank, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Hans,

      😂😂😂

      That is now the expectation for how everybody needs to read the chapters! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Hans (I got a great kick out of it!), and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

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    1. Hey Taka,

      That is such a great thing to hear. I’m really delighted that you feel it was worth the wait – after how last week’s chapter finished, I really wanted to live up to expectations 👍

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      ありがとうございました。

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    1. Hey Carly,

      That’s brilliant to see! I’m really glad you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for, as always, leaving such a positive comment, Carly, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Walsh,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m thrilled that you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Walsh, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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  2. “Well, well, well … evenin’ boys …” said Fletcher, moseying on up to the green with his hands buried in his pockets. “What do we have here, then?”

    THE HERO ENTRANCE!

    1. Hey Franklin,

      I know, right?! If it was wrestling, the only thing missing would be theme music and maybe a bit of pyro! 😁

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    1. Hey Mustgang,

      ✊🐎 – the only thing that needs to be said! I’m really glad you enjoyed it, though! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Mustgang, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Vlad,

      Yeah, he seems to have arrived just in the nick of time anyway! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Vlad, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Tray Chenko,

      Yeah, Conrad & Finn aren’t the nicest of guys! Luckily, Mustang is the kinda kid who isn’t afraid to stand up for himself, though 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Tray, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate such tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Gilles,

      That is really excellent to hear! After the way last week’s chapter finished, I really wanted to deliver with this one!😃

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Gilles, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Ron,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m really glad you enjoyed it! All I’ll say is that I’m delighted I didn’t go to your high school! 😂

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  3. Excellent next step. I was worried and I still a little am worried about Mustang. I think Fletcher will save him tho 🤞

    1. Hey Ettie,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter! That’s the good thing about Mustang – he’s as tough as nails, so he’s well able to handle himself 👍

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    1. Hey Harris,

      That is really great to hear! After last week’s chapter, I really wanted to live up to the expectations people were having for this new one, so it’s great to hear I delivered 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Harris, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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  4. REFRESH SATURDAY!

    That is a good chapter. I read it late last night but got it again this morning. big fan of this .

    1. Hey Booster,

      ALL HAIL REFRESH SATURDAY! 😂

      I’m delighted to hear that you’re enjoying the story, though! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Booster, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Charlie,

      Delighted you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Charlie, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

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    1. Hey Jarvis,

      ✊🐎 – delighted you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Jarvis, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Peter,

      That’s fantastic to hear! Delighted you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Peter, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Eric,

      Really glad you enjoyed it! And, just for any police reading this, I did not incite this violence against these or any other Potterheads! 😂

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Eric, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Ken,

      Delighted you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ken, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  5. Great double header. Now I’m hooked again for next week to find out what happened

    ** shakes fist **

    1. Hey Wrekker,

      Hahaha, then my diabolical plan worked a treat! 😂 Delighted you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Wrekker, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Louise,

      Oh no! Well, even with Fletcher rocking up, it is still, admittedly, a tense situation – especially with a loose cannon like Finn Hennessy still on the scene! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Louise, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hope you enjoy next week’s chapter 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

  6. this book is like those rounds of golf where you keep hitting great shots hole after hole. Not that I’ve ever done that but reading it, this is what it feels like

    1. Hey Damian,

      That is such a lovely thing to say! And I, too, have never had one of those rounds – if I manage to string just two holes-in-a-row where I hit two greens in regulation, I’m walking on air! 😂

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Damian, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Ollie,

      It was a proper superhero entrance, right?! Especially with the way he strode so confidently up to the green! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Ollie, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  7. Read this to my two little guys and they were so happy that Fletcher came to save the day it was so funny omg

    1. Hey Jilly,

      Aw, really?! That’s unreal! He does appear to have shown up in the nick of time, in fairness! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Jilly, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters for your little ones – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Wanda,

        That’s so cool to hear! With the blonde hair and picture-perfect smile, Fletcher does have that All-American, Superman-feel to him! 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Wanda, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Hope you all enjoy the next chapter! 👍

        Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Ivan,

      That was the kinda feel I was going for! With Fletcher’s South Carolina accent and the way I said he “moseyed” up to the green, I thought it would fit quite nicely! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Ivan, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Garrett,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed how I did it! I knew I had to come up with something good after the way last week’s chapter ended – so, it’s cool to hear I delivered 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Garrett, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Jonty,

      I’m really happy you liked it! To answer your question, though, I’ll be putting the chapter up on the Master Page in the next few minutes, so keep an eye out for it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Jonty, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Mustang Ang,

      I’m really glad you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Mustang Ang, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Horace,

      Well, I’m just happy that I’m able to keep delivering every week to make you say that! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Horace, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  8. VERY GOOD. I am reading this from Taiwan. My class has read this for the last few months as english lesson.

    1. Hey Rex,

      I’m really happy that you are enjoying the story! And that is really cool to hear that you and your class have been using Mustang as part of your English lessons! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Rex, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters (even if you have to do it for school!😁) – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      I hope you enjoy the next chapter 👍

      ✊🐎🇹🇼

      Stephen F. Moloney

  9. I love how mustang isn’t afraid. “Why would he be? He’s been through so much” ♥️

    1. Hey Louise G,

      That’s one of my favourite things about Mustang as well. Yes, he’s a naturally fantastic golfer, but everything he’s been through has created this unbelievably tough spirit that, when utilised properly, is what gives him his real edge. So, when it comes to dealing with the likes of Conrad and Finn? He won’t let himself be intimidated by them 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Louise, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – as you know, I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  10. Really inspiring. I was wondering how it would turn out (I read it in advance of reading it to my kid tonight so it wouldn’t be scary 😅) and it’s exactly the right message to send with reg: bullying. Well done

    1. Hey Anthony,

      Yes, I can imagine that the way last week’s chapter finished didn’t exactly make for the best bedtime reading! 😂 It’s really cool to hear that you like what I did with this week’s chapter, though, and that you think the message is a good one 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Anthony, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters (both yourself & for your kid) – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Yorick,

      You’re very welcome; I’m just delighted that you’re enjoying it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Yorick, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Bex,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m delighted it went over so well! I was hoping I’d be able to follow up last week’s chapter with a suitably good one, so it’s nice to see I delivered! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Bex, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Sam,

      That really is the best thing to hear after spending the week writing the chapter! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Sam, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Will,

      Yeah, Fletcher does seem to be able to handle himself like Ray, doesn’t he?! Like, he doesn’t seem too worried about how many people are on the green – he’s just confident 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Will, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Matt,

      You’re very welcome, but I’m just delighted to hear that you’re enjoying the story! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Matt, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇩🇪

      Stephen F. Moloney

        1. Hey P. Smit,

          That’s so cool to hear! I’m delighted you’re enjoying the story! And, out of interest, I just looked up Mittenwald on Google? What a lovely part of the world you live in! 😁

          Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, P. Smit, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

          ✊🐎🇩🇪

          Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Goose,

      I’m delighted that I got your day off to a good start! 😁

      Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Goose, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Ik hoop dat je geniet van het volgende hoofdstuk! ✊🐎🇳🇱

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Vicci,

      It’s always great to hear from a fellow member of the Mustang Gang! ✊🐎 I’m really glad that you’re enjoying the story! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Vicci, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Harry,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I was hoping people would be happy with this week’s chapter after the way last week’s finished, so that’s great to see that I delivered! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Harry, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  11. When I was last a regular reader there would be less than 20 comments! Excellent to see it going so well. I am very much into the new story too.

    1. Hey Gruntilda,

      First of all, welcome back! And, yeah, the story has really taken off over the last number of weeks – it’s really cool to see and to hear from loads of new people! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Gruntilda, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  12. Kids were scared at the last chapter but this one turned it around in a big way! Fletcher is the hero!

    1. Hey Mom in TX,

      Yeah, I’ve gotten the impression that the ending to the last chapter scared a few of the younger readers! Sorry about that! I’m really glad that your crew were feeling a bit better after this week’s one, though! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, MITX, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Rod,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Rod, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Vamos Mustang! ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Noel,

      That’s really great to hear! I’m delighted that you’re finding it useful! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Noel, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Goos,

      That is such a lovely thing to hear! I’m absolutely thrilled that you’re enjoying it so much! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Goos, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey Xavier,

        Delighted to hear it! 👍

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Xavier, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

  13. “Oh my God! Get on with it!” barked Mustang, his patience finally running out as he couldn’t bear listening to Finn fawning over Conrad a second longer. “What am I doing here?! Cause if it’s just to listen to you two droning on and on?! Then if this is meant to be some kind of hazing or whatever, I think I’ve been punished enough.”

    BAD*SS

    1. Hey Bernice,

      I’m delighted you liked that bit because I really did as well! He and Rodney may have been severely outnumbered at that point, but I love how Mustang just doesn’t care in the slightest! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a cool comment, Bernice, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    2. My fav line! I wish my son would read and take note for when people try to aggravate him they would not continue with mustang’s attitude

      1. Hey Ewan,

        I’m delighted you liked that line as well! 😁 And, to be honest, I wish I had more of Mustang’s attitude when I was growing up – nothing wrong with standing up for yourself.

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ewan, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

  14. Ich möchte hier eine Nachricht hinterlassen, nachdem ich viele Monate gelesen habe. Ich bin ein Fan Ihrer Arbeit und habe ein digitales Buch gekauft. Es ist ausgezeichnet und ich werde es wieder tun.

    1. Hey Marcus Bav,

      That’s such a lovely thing to hear – I’m delighted that you’re enjoying everything that I’m doing! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Marcus; for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters; and, of course, for buying a digital copy of the book – that kind of support really does help me out tremendously 🙏

      Dankeschön.

      Stephen F. Moloney

  15. I’ve burned through the entire book series in the last week since my brother sent it to me. You are very talented. I’m a little inspired seeing what you have done here given that I have often wanted to write something but never had the drive to actually so because I thought it would never get published. Thank you for giving me a bit of inspiration to see that you don’t have to do it like this.

    1. Hey Wells,

      That is such a lovely compliment! I wouldn’t worry about publishers. If you want to write something? Just do it. Now, it’s a lot of work, I won’t lie – but you’ll never know if you don’t have a crack 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Wells, and, of course, for supporting the story – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Best of luck with the writing! 😁

      Stephen F. Moloney

    2. I have thought the same thing Wells. This way of publishing has really given me a big boost. Can I do the books like Mr Moloney? I have no idea but it makes me want to try.

      1. Hey Jooky,

        That’s fantastic to hear! You’ll never know if you don’t try! 👍

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Jooky, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Good luck with the writing! 😁

        Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Yir,

      ✊🐎

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Yir, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  16. I know there isn’t an illustration but I feel like Mustang has been kidnapped by Abercrombie & Fitch mannequins come to life. I just picture them looking like a cargo trailer of polo shirts and tight chinos exploded all over them

    1. Hey Mustang Enjoyer,

      I was very tempted to get an illustration done for this chapter, but I have one in mind for a few chapters from now, so I said I’d spare it! Conrad and the boys do have that feel, though, don’t they?! 😂 Well, if it helps, all the American guys would still be in variations of their dress clothes from the formal dinner with Dallas, while the GB&I boys would definitely be wearing designer gear.

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Mustang Enjoyer, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Othorn,

      ✊🐎

      My apologies for the late reply. With so many comments coming in, it’s hard to keep track of everyone I’ve replied to sometimes. But I’m delighted to see that you’re enjoying the story, though! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Othorn, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Ellis,

      That really is fantastic to hear! And I’m especially glad to hear the ebook is working well! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Ellis; for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters; and, of course, for buying a digital copy of the book – that kind of support really does help me out tremendously 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Francis,

      Delighted to see you enjoyed it! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Francis, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Terry,

      That’s really great to hear! After how last week’s chapter ended, I knew I needed things to be a bit more hopeful-looking in this week’s! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Terry, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Erin,

      That is so cool to hear that you wore your Mustang Gang t-shirt to school! I’m delighted you like it so much! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Erin; for reading the story every week; and, of course, for getting a t-shirt as well – that kind of support really does mean a tremendous amount to me 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Keith,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m delighted the two of you enjoyed it! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a positive comment, Keith, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  17. Marathon run of this since chapter 1 of book 1 to today in the last two months. it’s great. I wrap it around me everyday and feel real attachment to the characters.

    1. Hey Bruno,

      Wow! That really is a marathon of reading – I’m extremely flattered! I’m thrilled that you’ve enjoyed it so much, though, and it’s brilliant to hear that you’ve built up that rapport with the characters; as a writer, that’s always something you want to see! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Bruno, and, of course, for supporting the story to such a dedicated extent – I really do appreciate it 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    2. I find myself to think about Mustang quite a bit in the last few weeks. The relationship with the Ray is very special and makes me feel the love.

      1. Hey Lars,

        That’s such a cool thing to hear! Establishing that relationship between Mustang and Ray was something I really worked on from the first book, so it’s brilliant to see that it comes across when people are reading it! 😁

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Lars, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        Stephen F. Moloney

  18. C’est un livre intéressant! Je vais continuer à lire chaque semaine pendant un certain temps.

    § Eguisheim

    1. Salut, Charles,

      That’s really great to hear! I’m delighted you’ve enjoyed the story and are going to continue reading it – for the next few weeks, at least! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Charles, and, of course, for giving the story a chance – I really do appreciate the support 🙏

      Aussi, Eguisheim est un très beau village! 😁

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Ger,

      I’m really glad you’re enjoying it! And that’s fantastic to hear that it translates well over to Afrikaans as well – it always blows my mind to think people are reading Mustang in so many different languages! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Ger, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Heyes,

      Delighted you enjoyed it! ✊🐎

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Heyes, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Pete,

      Hahaha, Fletcher does appear to have come ready to rumble, doesn’t he?!

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Pete, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hope you enjoy the next chapter! 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey OpheliaCat,

      That’s really great to hear! With the way the last chapter ended, I knew I had my work cut out for me to try and deliver with this one, so it’s great to hear that I delivered 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, OC, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  19. Я стал большим поклонником этой книги. Русский перевод работает хорошо, поэтому я благодарен! Приедет ли Мустанг в Россию?

    1. Hey BoyBoy,

      That’s brilliant to hear! I’m really glad that you’re enjoying the story and that the Russian translation is working well for you! 👍 To answer your question, though, I don’t know whether Mustang will go to Russia or not – there’s no reason why he couldn’t go there. I would like to come up with a Russian golfer, though – I think that would be cool! 🇷🇺

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, BoyBoy, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Спасибо ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  20. I find myself thinking every week that I can’t wait for the next bit of the story. Probably a good thing!!

    1. Hey Thomas,

      That is most definitely a good thing for me anyway! 😁 I’m really glad that you’re enjoying the story so much, though 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Thomas, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Elise,

      That’s such a cool thing to hear! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying it so much! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, Elise, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  21. Great book, great golf knowledge. Last time I was reading your work, you were predicting finishes. I like that stuff but I like this even more. Keep it up.

    1. Hey Brandon,

      Wow! Yeah, back when I was doing the Oracles’ Fourball (my favourite was calling SungJae Im for the Honda Classic 😁) – that feels like another lifetime ago at this stage! I’m really happy that you’re enjoying the story, though, and that you’re finding the golf parts stack up appropriately 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Brandon, and, of course, for coming back to give the story a chance – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Tem,

      That’s fantastic to hear! I’m delighted you’re happy with the quality of both your shirt and the digital copy – that’s always a big priority for me! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Tem; for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters; and, of course, for making your two purchases – that kind of support really does help me out a tremendous deal, so I’m very much appreciative 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey MustangFanChicago,

      That’s such a cool thing to hear! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying it so much – and, especially so, from all the way over in Chicago! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive review, MFC, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎🇺🇸

      Stephen F. Moloney

  22. I’m really enjoying the enforced pace of going week to week on this story. It allows it to breathe. Very good work

    1. Hey Tim Senior,

      I’m really glad you’re enjoying it! I find that to be a cool thing about doing the book this way as well; it’s almost like how old serials or penny dreadfuls used to work – getting an instalment every week. It, hopefully, builds a nice sense of anticipation for each chapter 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive review, Tim, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Dara,

      He really is, isn’t he! It’s one of my favourite things about him – he doesn’t care who it is, he’s not going to let anyone push him around! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Dara, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

  23. ✊🐴✊🐴✊🐴✊🐴✊🐴

    That’s my face when mustang throws a secret golf club he has hidden down his pants at the kidnappers

    1. Hey Ultan,

      Drat! I never thought of giving Mustang a concealed 7-iron! A missed opportunity on my part! 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Ultan (I got a good kick out of it!), and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

    1. Hey Funk,

      Well, as the person who’s still in the middle of writing the next chapter I can assure you that Saturday feels as though it’s like a runaway train just barrelling down the track towards me!! 😂 It’s really cool to hear that you’re looking forward to the next chapter so much, though! 👍

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, Funk, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. You right these every week? I thought you scheduled! I was almost fully certain of it! That is seriously impressive. I actually cannot believe that.

        1. Hey Tennant,

          Yeah, I write them every week! I mean, ideally, I’d have the whole thing written already and just be scheduling each chapter as you mentioned, but I decided to go for the far more intense option of doing them from scratch every week! 😅

          Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a positive comment, Tennant, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

          Hope you enjoy the next chapter (that I’ll, hopefully, have finished in time! 🤞)

          Stephen F. Moloney

          1. Hey Jurgen,

            Yeah, every chapter is written from scratch each week! Well, it’s a lot of work, but once I publish a chapter on a Saturday, I start the very next chapter on Saturday evening or Sunday morning and, usually, manage to have the actual writing of it finished by the following Thursday. I then edit it on Friday, publish it on Saturday, and then start the process all over again! 😅 As for the length of the chapters? They’re usually between 3500-4500 words; though, this week’s has wound up being particularly long at over 5000!

            Thank you very, very much for your positive question, Jurgen, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – that’s the reason I put in all the work during the week! 👍

            Stephen F. Moloney

  24. I try to leave the chapter until the end of the week so I can get two chapters pretty quick but I have to leave it for two weeks to get that two chapter feeling!

    1. Hey Winnie,

      Wow! I can see why you’d do that, though, as you’d end up with a nice 30-40 mins of reading then! 😁 What I will say about this week’s chapter, though, is that it’s wound up being a bit of a jumbo one – 27 mins long – so it could well feel like two chapters! 😂

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Winnie, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week (or two weeks 😁) to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Stephen F. Moloney

  25. any chance you could drop the chapter today?? 😅 I have an 8 year old coming home from school each day checking! Keep up the excellent work

    1. Hey Kayla,

      Well, I love the enthusiasm to see the next chapter, but I’m afraid that as I’ve literally just started editing it this morning, there’s still a bit more work to go into it before it’s ready to be seen! 😅 It should be worth the wait when it comes out, though, as it’s a chunky 27-mins-worth of reading! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a lovely comment, Kayla, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      Hope your 8-year old enjoys the next chapter now! 👍

      Stephen F. Moloney

  26. Saturday…. waiting too long for Saturday. All the Mustang Gang get Saturday Morning Fever!

    1. Hey Heavy Putt Pete,

      I know! I’ve gotten word that the Mustang Gang are already mobilizing ahead of tomorrow’s chapter and polishing up their respective refresh keys! There’s been a leak (from me) that this week’s chapter is going to be a hefty 28-mins long, so the anticipation is reaching fever-pitch! 😁

      Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a cool comment, HPP, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

      ✊🐎

      Stephen F. Moloney

      1. Hey David,

        That would be in keeping with the recent research into the associated symptoms of Saturday Morning Fever – the most prevalent, of course, being an intense urge to refresh a computer screen that grows exponentially in strength from Wednesday onwards 😂

        Thank you very, very much for taking the time to, as always, leave such a cool comment, David, and, of course, for continuing to come back every week to read the new chapters – I really do appreciate the tremendous support 🙏

        And, hopefully, your Saturday Morning Fever will have eased come this time tomorrow! 😁

        ✊🐎🇩🇪

        Stephen F. Moloney

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